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She Was a Killer

Updated on April 12, 2012

When i was young ~ my older friends always refered to some girls as Killer's. After seeing the older guys get their hearts broken, we knew why.


Did you say, she is a Killer

Yes, thats her standing over there

that sweet, fine girl

the one with the long black hair


Don't get tempted

to make her your own

remember she is ruthless

and no mercy will be shown


She has the kind of long legs

that you just can't miss

but after looking at her lips

you would die just for a kiss


Yes, she is a Killer

a badd Woman, you will find

she will not only rip up your heart

she will destroy your mind


The men think they can take her

she knows how to lead them on

they are brokenhearted to find out

that they were just her pawn.






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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Yo max, they just disabled my ads on here for a reason that i can't tell you about. but thanks for reading . wow, the first time this has happenened to one of my poems. I am a badddd man, max, a baddd man.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Intense, good warning! They are like that ever-shining light that you can't resist, attracting unsuspecting victims like moths to a flame...but oh, so delicious light! ...even if for a fleeting moment!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ahh... Zayleen, my little tender flower.

      thanks for the visit.glad you liked my poem. I don't really favor this one as one of my best but everyone thinks different ways and poetry to some is just a jumble of words to others. thanks for the comments.

      hope to see you read more. I want to learn how to write with the same rage you express on your poetry and writes.

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      brittney 5 years ago from lost in my own minds lines

      Amazing..........beautiful peice here......

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Caroline, thanks for the visit and the comment. I took this pic from your site because i thought it was awsomme. Hubpages made me take off my others I started with.LOL

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      LOL Great poem Michael. I like the picture too. I took one from the same artist she's awesome.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Raci, the hubpages made me take my piictures down. thanks for The comments.

      @ lady, thanks for the visit, i would have pics but the pages made me take them down.

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      Lady_Tenaz 5 years ago

      Sadly us women often go too far in the ways of love. We get hurt, and then when we find good guys we hurt them. What a vicious cycle isn't it. There are men and women alike who both hurt the opposite sex, and either way it hurts equally. Hopefully those women out there wake up and change before they find themselves as old women all alone... good poem.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      i am looking for the picture of the killer, killer smile, killer looks, hmn...

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      Great pictures that fit your hub perfectly.You inspired me to write a hub.Heart Breaker Has Come For You.Have a good day.

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      Great words and the ones I have seen have high heels that they can use as weapons.It starts with one look and a few months later you are mince meat.Let the truth be told.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Karin, this was wrote in jest and fun. You know it really is in admiration. thanks for the comment, I still love you .But treat me tender.

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      Ah, Michael, Michael...We Wicked Women, Us! lol. While i love how you put words together, and understand the gist of your poem - i feel spurred to remind you that some of 'US' can have legs...and lips...and brains - and NOT want to rip a man's heart out! No..seriously..LOL

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      b. Malin 5 years ago

      She's a Man Handler...who sang that song...EVERY MAN who's every been there. Very Good Cleaner...sounds like a little of you in there Mike.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Devil woman indeed!! Beware they're everywhere...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Oh my poor little nikki, come over here and let me give you a big hug, but don't fall in love with me and i won't fall in love with you. O.K/?

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      Nikki Wicked 5 years ago from Louisiana

      yea well shit happens. at least i dont lead someone on when i know my hearts not in it. like a lot of guys did to me..

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @Cebu, thanks for commenting and your support.

      @ anna, thanks for the warning. my hands are so red, I am running out of lotion.LOL

      @ nikki, yea, thats what they all say, I didn't mean to break your heart, Thats when I answer i didn't mean to fall in love with you either. LOL

      @ Katrine, ahh, A strong beautiful woman who knows her place . I only like that kind of woman to date, but not to marry. that usually leads to D-i-v-o-r-c-e.

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      It's a great poem Michael. I think the 'killer' ladies are a minority. You are probably referring to those women who really just like to play around with men. Being beautiful and sexy and having self-esteem and confidence is wonderful. I believe the majority of men would love to have a woman like that by their side, but there are also many who can't handle it. By nature men like to be the leaders, and having a strong woman by their side may not always be easy for them.

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      Nikki Wicked 5 years ago from Louisiana

      if looks could kill... looks arent everything. get a girl of substance...beauty inside and out. Some guys are killers as well. Ive gotten my heart broken plenty enough. but Ive also done my share of breaking hearts.. though not intentionally or on purpose.

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      Woo hoo! Forewarned! Take the advice, or succumb to it. The decision is yours.

      Some people keep reaching for the candy, and suffer the hand slaps.

      Have a happy day Michael.....AD

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      cebutouristspot 5 years ago from Cebu

      Yup we have that here too, Specially those girl who will just use you and throw you away after.