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She'd rather dance with lions....

Updated on August 19, 2013

All the while they smile and look
down at me for trying
She'd now rather dance with them
ah the knot's finally untying

That's okay though there's a surprise storm
coming onto the plains
Her golden hair is beautiful though
yet not the same as their manes

She'll learn that in time ...though
it could take her years
I'll beg my leaving now love
remember me through the years

And when the zoo closes down and
all's quiet in the jungle that you know
I won't be there to save you
backwards is a place that I don't go

The neon lights are all gone the
empty bottles lie silent and eerie
Do you know hear an echo of my voice
or is it just the wind my deary

You begged to go dance with the lions and they
chose to ignore the rules
You called me the loser once I guess
now you're the fools


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      Laurel Rogers 3 years ago from Bishop, Ca

      Thank you ahb for the trickle of tears this morning as I drink my 1st cup of coffee. I don't mean that at all in a negative sense; it's a positive and hopeful one, at least to me. The meaning is sorrowful yet victorious-I love that.

      Your writing is stunning as usual, as your use of this metaphor took me in thoroughly. I won't go on about how I 'voted' this piece; suffice it to say that I saved it on my computer so I can read it again and again.

      Thank you dear friend,


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      ahorseback 3 years ago

      Hey Girl, Nice to see that beautiful smile Laurel ! You've always had a way to make me feel like a writer rather than a scribbler ! Thank you for that ! Sorrowful yet victorious , that's us isn't it ! Hugs from Ed!

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      Karen Silverman 3 years ago must be careful what one wishes for. Never say never to going backwards, but, this piece of work sure ain't worthy! lol

      love your poetry, Cowboy. Wish you promoted it more! Other's need to see it..


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      Richard Ricky Hale 3 years ago from West Virginia

      Awesome, beautiful poem! Such a beautiful array of words:) Voted up, awesome, beautiful, and shared.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Lovely poem and an unusual topic. Enjoyed it.

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      A great poem Ed and thanks for another gem. Wishing you a great day .


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Incredible poetry. Never get me dancing with lions.

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      Eric Wayne Flynn 3 years ago from Providence, Rhode Island


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