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She Rose (poem)

Updated on September 11, 2013

Long before the dreams the hopes the wishes cast

The scenes which took his heart away

The themes of his imagination

The purpose of his breath

She rose


Long before the Joys the glow the kiss of dawn

The reasons flowing in the air

The limitless possibilities

The smile across his skies

She rose


And there in a moment

This timeless forever

Paradox of reason

Blossomed to the light


Blossomed through his wonderings

Far beyond his fantasies

Far beyond the still waters

Touched by the moon

As the orchestra played

Laid at her feet


Long before the sighs the thrills the pure magic

The endless treasures there fashioned

The world which waited stroke of a brush

One more moment of this

She rose


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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Your talent shows in this poem. Such beautiful prose and written with such passion.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Wonderful poem! Enjoyed!

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      I am really drawn to this line "The smile across his skies."

      Nicely done.


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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      The complexities of life can also be tended by simplicity. A great piece, Martin.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      Amazing and romantic!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      So lovely and so romantic.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Oh so very beautiful Martin and keep these gems coming. I love them and share onto My Brand New Dawn.


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      PoeticPhilosophy 4 years ago from Canada

      Beautiful poem Mhatter!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful Martin!!

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      Wonderful, Martin.

      You take something so simple and turn it into a thing of beauty.

      You sculpt a scene with your words and take us on a journey through

      each stanza.

      And, You leave us wanting more.


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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      I love your romantic heart, Martin.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Those are lovely dreams of "she" and such romantic music ...beautiful.

      Up and more and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      Tony DeLorger 4 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      A romantic soul, Martin. Nicely penned and much enjoyed.