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She’s Crying (poem)

Updated on February 1, 2015

She’s crying She’s crying

In darkness relying

Sweet victim of lying

To cover her dying

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Her fate she’s denying

She’s crying She’s crying

Pain’s sorrow applying

She’s crying She’s crying

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She loved him so

How could she know

His hand he’d show

To make tears flow

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She’s crying She’s crying

Her dreams are left flying

She’s past point of trying

More chances applying

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What’s real she’s defying

She’s crying She’s crying

For truth left her sighing

She’s crying She’s crying

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When love did go

How could he know

What soon would grow

From painful blow

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She’s crying She’s crying

With horror allying

From sanity shying

To now she is vying

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Her boyfriend now lying

She’s crying She’s crying

In blood he’s there dying

She’s crying She’s crying

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 

      5 years ago from Lincolnshire, U.K

      Beautifully done!!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So sad. A situation in which only crying will do.

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      Deb Hirt 

      5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      I have known people like that. It happens when least expected.

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      kjforce 

      5 years ago from Florida

      Mhatter99..we cry when we are happy..we cry when we are sad..we cry when we are hurt..and we cry when we are mad..we cry when we hurt the one who made us cry..but for that we shouldn't even sigh....loved it..nice flow...

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      Oh, my goodness. The ending is so sad. I think the women in your poems need to give up on love. They all seem to end so tragically!

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      thost 

      5 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

      This poem has nice rhythm and balance. Makes you want to whip out a guitar and start singing the words. She’s crying She’s crying...yeah yeah yeah. Enough said. Thank you Martin.

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      DJ Anderson 

      5 years ago

      Hey, that is what happens when you tick off the wrong person.

      Guess he won't be lying any more.

      Great read, Martin. You have done it again. Congratulations on super

      work!

      DJ.

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      Patricia Scott 

      5 years ago from sunny Florida

      The bloodshed did not end the tears....the sorrowful strains of the video captured well the mood. Sending Angels your way ...am purchasing moments of laughter this morning to share with a friend...

      :) ps

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      Devika Primić 

      5 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Great expressions and with such an imagination

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      Janis Leslie Evans 

      5 years ago from Washington, DC

      Beautifully shared pain of two. Thank you for this piece of art.

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      Jim Higgins 

      5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Interesting and vital words, ending in death, mysterious death.

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      Beth37 

      5 years ago

      Very sad.

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      Faith Reaper 

      5 years ago from southern USA

      That's a lot of crying!!!! Interesting read.

      Voted up + and sharing

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Lissette 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      The risk run by choosing the one not born to be a victim. Very fluid read. Always loved the madness of a fellow hatter.

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