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Shimmering Brook (tanka)

Updated on July 29, 2015

Shimmering brook

Which so often filled her glass

With your melody

Fill my glass with some refrain

For I find myself thirsty


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      Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

      Lovely and sweet!

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      Shauna L Bowling 2 years ago from Central Florida

      Awesome! You've said so much in so few words. I really like this one Martin.

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      Sam Tumblin 2 years ago from Eunice, La.

      Thanks for sharing Shimmering Brook on Hubpages...Looking forward to read more of your work.