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Silence Fills the Air

Updated on February 8, 2013


White sparkling snow,
floats softly through the air
carried along by the blowing wind
landing on the grass,
spreading the love
of life and purity

Silence fills the Air

As it it touches the ground,
listen to the sound...

Silence fills the Air

If the birds sing in the tree's,
do they sing to the breeze
Do they make a sound..
if no one is around ?
the sounds abound...

Silence fills the Air

Movement, writing on a page
something that you sage...
it's only music.. kept in a cage
only when you make it sing
does it truly ring

Silence fills the Air

Does life make a sound...
who listens to my heart
you feel it all around ?
In your mind the glee
Is all you want to see

Silence fills the Air

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    • cleaner3 profile image
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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thanks Ed for the visit ..

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      ahorseback 4 years ago

      Awesome write my friend !.........:-}

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you for the visit and the comment..

      I am surprised as to how most stop and ponder my words and thoughts written , some interesting comments.!

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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      This is a beauty...."silence fills the air" gives us much to ponder. "Who listens to my heart", I really love that line, actually, I love the whole thing.

      Voted up, beautiful, and awesome.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Siberian wolf , thanks for the comments.

      @teaches , thank you for the visit and the the nice comment.

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Very beautifully written and the photos enhance the thought. Silence fill the air -- you just have to listen and see.

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      Eric T. Shortridge 4 years ago from MidWest

      "music kept in a cage" Love that! this rocks

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank You Rochelle...

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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      Awesome! Profound words and love the pictures.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      wayne , thank you for the comment.!

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Beautifully written poem. I was taken by the rhythm and flow of the lines from the beginning.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Deborah, thank you for the visit and your comments

      @James , thank you my friend. for the comments

      @dreamseeker, thank you for the comment

      @Dotti, thanks Dotti, you are to kind.

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      D.Juris Stetser 4 years ago from South Dakota

      Awesome, Beautiful, Interesting, and Up...and sharing...Michael, you have really come into your own with your poetry. this has such depth, feeling, and sheer beauty. And as always, your choice of photos to go with it are flawless. I admire you tremendously. you just keep getting better and better...hugs Dear Michael. thank you for sharing this with us

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      dreamseeker2 4 years ago

      Beautiful piece of poetry. Had to be voted up and awesome! : )

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Awesome and beautiful.I voted up.Thanks for sharing my friend.

      Many Blessings to you.

      James.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      what a wonderful poem.. I always love reading your poetry..

      and the pictures.. wow.. thank you.. for sharing this beauty.

      sharing

      Debbie

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ aloha my friend , thank you for the visit.

      @Jackie, yes it makes a beautiful sound, although we in our own mind know it does ,we still only hear the silence.thanks for the comment and the visit.

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Just beautiful...words and pictures and I think they do indeed make sound, even with no one around!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Tim, thanks for the comment and the visit. you have described my poem better than i ever could. Once again, thanks for the comment it was "nice".

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      Hawaiian Odysseus 4 years ago from Southeast Washington state

      Hi, Michael!

      Beautifully expressed and aesthetically presented. Love your images, both the poetry and the pictures. Aloha!

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      Tim Mitchell 4 years ago from Escondido, CA

      Thank you cleaner3 for sharing these words laced together in poetic charm. Feelings are struck along its path of nature and thoughts until a question is proposed within silence. I am left by those words of heart and mind opening a window. Though outside is seen, experience occurs once opened, and then ponder occurs with the last stanza.

      Nice! is a comment I use, sometimes misunderstood, yet simply means 'speechless,' of which I whisper with the tone of an early morning bell, 'Nice!'

      tim

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Thank You Hatter..

      @dghbrh, thank you for uplifting comment .

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Awwww.....very well done. Quite with depth and with feelings for sure...

      '...Movement, writing on a page

      something that you sage...

      it's only music.. kept in a cage

      only when you make it sing

      does it truly ring

      Silence fills the Air...'

      The music which you freed here in this one .....is amazing and let it sing instead of making it caged. Thank you for sharing this one and I am sharing too. Votes ++++++++++++++++

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      A recitation piece... At least that's how this well written piece struck me. Thank you

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank You rosemay , you are beautiful..

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      Rosemary Sadler 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      This is deep and beautiful Michael. Love that cute image of the kitten and dog.

      Have a lovely weekend

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you for your constant and uplifting support.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Very beautiful! Loved every word and every line. Glad you are back writing such lovely poetry.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper