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Silent Surrender (tanka)

Updated on July 27, 2013

Silent surrender

Kisses of another day

Racing through my soul

With each heartbeat yet unheard

Calling me once more to you


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      Deb Hirt 

      5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      This should have been in Godspell. Remember Day by Day? It gives me the same sort of feeling.

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      Victor W. Kwok 

      5 years ago from Hawaii

      Very romantic.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 

      5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Memorable and beautiful.

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      Eiddwen 

      5 years ago from Wales

      Only one words needed here:- Beautiful.

      Eddy.

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      Cat 

      5 years ago from New York

      I'll never be able to fully comprehend how it is you can say so much in such few words! In awe, always.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I love this and the picture is beautiful...

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      Live To Write 

      5 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      MMMMM.... very nice... so few words; but such strong meaning and beautifully expressed... I am pinning it to my Beautiful poetry page...

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      lovedoctor926 

      5 years ago

      Beautiful poetry so full of deep, strong emotions

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      Karen Silverman 

      5 years ago

      SEX-Y!!

      i love your passion my friend.

      Your pix are always perfect - any idea where i can find a 'free' uncopyrighted pic??

      thanks M..

      sharingxx

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      Nellieanna Hay 

      5 years ago from TEXAS

      Perfect, Martin: the poetry, the emotion expressed. Just beautiful!

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      Another beauty, Martin. Your passion and way with words are truly a gift. Thank you for sharing your gifts so freely with us.

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      Thomas Silvia 

      5 years ago from Massachusetts

      Very beautiful tanka thanks for sharing this !

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      Faith Reaper 

      5 years ago from southern USA

      Very beautiful ... I love your "Silent Surrender" tanka. It is good to surrender and sometimes maybe not even silently. : )

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      Hugs and love,

      Faith Reaper

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      kidscrafts 

      5 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Very beautiful! Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry!

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      Patricia Scott 

      5 years ago from sunny Florida

      How I know this feeling. Beautiful and not surprisingly so as you have such a wondrous way of painting such passionate feelings. Angels are on the way this morning. ps

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