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Sinking Deeper

Updated on July 23, 2011

Staring out into the ocean's horizon...

I get closer to the sea...

Feet touching the water..

The ocean calling me.

Slowly I begin to near the water...

I kneel down to get a swoosh..!

Splash on my face,

Feels so good.

I embrace the liquid matter,

Letting it have it's way with me...

As I near the deep,

I relax my body...

With my eyes close,

Letting myself go...

I'm sinking deeper and deeper...

Into the oceans flow...

Swirling round and round,

Not a peep...

Not a sound...

Just my peace.

Floating up to the surface,

My heart beating fast,

I enjoyed that very much ocean...

I had peace at last.

Thank you deep blue,

For letting me surrender myself to you...

It was something that I needed to do.

Written by: Jlono ©2011 


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      jasminegeorge 6 years ago from Rome

      beautiful hub!thank you! :)

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      JadedLove 6 years ago

      Hello smiles. You write with such a beautiful heart. Thank you so much for finding me. I never come on to read, well now I do.

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      ROMANCER OF LIFE 6 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      Hey Thank you all so very much for the comments! Most of all thank you for your visit. I'm so sorry for the late response. I've been so very busy.

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      Karen A. Harris 6 years ago from Milwaukee, WI

      awww that sounded so refreshing. I want to go to the beach :( Your poem makes me think about my visit to the Bahamas and the first time I felt the warm sand between my toes and how the warm water kissed my body.

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      Abdinasir Aden 6 years ago from Minneapolis, MN

      Very nice hub.

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      Christopher Dapo and S. 6 years ago from Havelock, NC

      I know what it's like to miss the sand between my toes. Thanks for bringing us along with you in such lovely detail!

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      sandarya 6 years ago from Bangalore, India

      It, was great... it make me remember my last beach visit experience, I felt bit same as this poem say's. thanks

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Another beautiful hub, and as a beach lover I am so jealous. LOL. But can I ask if the shallow safer part near the sand might be more nicer to stay? I like to be not too deep..but that is just me.

      And yes, I am a coward. LOL. I have to be able to be in water and be able to tip the bottom with my feet, well...most of the time anyway. But then I am sure the beaches there are totally awesome too, Rena. Please stay safe and have a sweet day, okay? (Hugs)


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