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Sinking into LOVe

Updated on June 18, 2010

You whispered to my heart so randomly

And took me my the hand so utterly

And spoke those little words in my ear

Tampering through the moment’s fear

I knelt, submitted to those words of yours

And as I opened my heart I felt a bond, a force

It patched up my heart into yours and made me whole

“I love you!” was the only one to cure the obscure hole

And now I have desirable warmth in my spirit it beats willingly

So I thank you at hours of darkness when you are asleep so silently

For before you I was dead, doomed and cold wondering

I knew no light nothing I was left in the dark burning

And now I fear no shadows as I lay in your arms

As you have cured by injured heart from everything that harms

And I pray to God and bow so hard that I cry

For you are my blessing , my knight from a lie

I ask God in the name of his Angles to keep you by my side

“Protect Him from people’s vengeful eyes, “ I bowed and cried

I have no one else but you, who whispered to my heart

When it was torn apart you joined its parts, all from the start

You gave me air when all what’s around me burned to inferno

So you are my Michael, my angel by love my Valentino ~

Into the endless fever of your love I cast myself, happily

Into the mad nets of your arms I sink into love willingly

Love is like taking my breath away

And with every kiss my heart will sway


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      Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon

      james jenkins jr i also do that from time to time :P you should try AIDY's profile for great poetry she is a great writer as well as a poet under the name AM I DEAD YET? i totally love her poetry. you can also try invictus , Cris as well as Ralwus those three will get you captivated.

      Jayb thanks a lot really i am flattered. I sure wouldn't mind you using the poem in the end this is the least i can do :D



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      jayb23 7 years ago from India

      Amazing Uriel. I just dont have words to describe it. I hope you wont mind if i can use this poem for my girl :-) I will surely give u the credits if it works

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      james jenkins jr 7 years ago from deep in thought

      Sometimes I just search throgh and read others poems for hours. And to find one like this to read would be the reason why. Phenominal. Hubs like this are why I'am a fan of poetry.

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      Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon

      True ~ sometimes losing yourself means finding yourself as well as the ONE later on :D

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      Cris A 7 years ago from Manila, Philippines

      Oh l'amour! We wallow, we sink, we drown and would do it again and again and again... :D

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      Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon

      live endure and earn your spot in this land ~ that's all what we can do :D

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      ralwus 7 years ago

      Good for you. I knew it would come to you soon. You're growing up and I like that, but take care when hurt comes, it means you are living. It is good to be alive painful as it can be. great writing darlin'. Charlie

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      Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon

      Freya you are my very loyal friend and i thank you for that :D though i hope we can catch up on msn or yahoo. What do you think? ( can i add you or something ?)

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      Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      Beautiful love for beautiful heart. Finally, I read something not dark from you, Sis. love it. Wish you all happiness and peace.

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      Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon

      Yeh we need appreciation and love from time to time. " Live well, age well and go bald well. And, if you can, die smiling."- Kurosaki Isshin

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      Mentalist acer 7 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      A loving meditation Uriel:)!