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Skate - An Original Poem By S

Updated on August 20, 2013
Skate FX!!
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When I skate

My skates exhilirate

And I forget about the state

Of the good or bad of the world or it's fate


When I skate

I rise above

Because skating is what I love

And no one can bring me down if they're talking some lame ol' jive

Because I am happy to be alive

When I skate


When my skates touch the floor

I don't feel any pain anymore


I feel free


And everything is great

When I skate!


- S.



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      Christopher Dapo and S. 4 years ago from Havelock, NC

      Thank you very much, BlossomSB, it's always good to hear from you! - S.

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      Christopher Dapo and S. 4 years ago from Havelock, NC

      I'm very glad that my poem took you back to the good times in your life you wanted to remember...and here's to having many more! - S.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      I love the way you described it. Interesting.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I know the feeling of being free when skating. That was one of the things i loved the most. Thank you for taking me back to my fun times on a Saturday afternoon... loved this...