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Slave No More

Updated on November 23, 2011
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Sometimes you can be stuck as a slave to yourself or someone else. When you finally know how to let go of everything and everyone that holds you back, you are set free.


Slave No More

Rage struck me

From within

My heart sank

Then chimed in

A pitted rot

Has set in

Darkness that was brought

Upon me falls

Chains that held me back

Tattered walls

A passion deep inside

Awakened again

I found myself

I'm not forsaken

I am not trapped here

Anymore

Puppet strings that binded me

Ripped

Tangled

Sank to the floor

Set free

I can escape now

You are not my master

Slave no more to you

You can't hear me weep

I owe not debt to you

Maybe I will see you again

One day

When time beats faster

Until then my friend

Forever after

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Zac for reading and commenting!

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      Zac828 5 years ago from England

      Wow Caroline, very powerful piece and beautifully written, lots of imagery. You write some great hubs, advice as well as poems. Voted up and following. x

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Sky I know I left you a comment somewhere here. I appreciate all your great compliments my dear friend as always. :)

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Jami you're totally right! Thanks for stopping by. :)

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      jami l. pereira 5 years ago

      I liked this piece ! It was a very nice way , in a way , to tell someone to "f" off ! LOL Great write , loved it ! :) voted up and aweosme!:)

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Poems that come from feelings deep within are very difficult hide, they come from a truthful place. Even if it hurts sometimes to write, it sets the writer free.

      It does something to whoever's reading attempting to experience that place through the poets words.

      Their skin it reacts.

      This is a deep poem , I enjoyed reading. It's beautiful Very nice Caroline. I shall read more.

      Perfect picture.

      Bless.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      WD Curry- Your words means a lot to me. Thank you!

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      WD Curry 111 5 years ago from Space Coast

      been there, done that. I am a proser, I studied poetry intensely in college. I don't write poetry, but I know good poetry when I read it. I am formally trained in interpretation. This is a great poem. Not a word was wasted. Thanks for showing it.