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Sneaky Pete (A Poem)

Updated on September 9, 2015

Sneaky Pete

He ain't no cheat

He skulks around

The midnight street

Where the neon sign

And the murky deep

Blink upon

His soft white feet



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      Eldon Arsenaux 22 months ago from Cooley, Texas

      Brilliant atmosphere with such short verse. Eerie rhythm.

      Dug the Hub!

      -E.G.A.

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      Terry Chestnutt 22 months ago from Cleveland, Ohio

      That's very useful feedback, E.G.A. Best kind to get. So it is good when atmosphere is built vividly and quickly. Thanks. I'll remember that a long time. And use it too.

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      stella vadakin 22 months ago from 3460NW 50 St Bell, Fl32619

      Different and brilliant, I like it.

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      Terry Chestnutt 22 months ago from Cleveland, Ohio

      I like different and brilliant too, ladyguitarpicker. Thanks!

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      John Hansen 22 months ago from Queensland Australia

      For some reason I like these short verses of yours Wrath. Very catchy and different.

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      Terry Chestnutt 22 months ago from Cleveland, Ohio

      I've decided, Jodah, I'll keep writing them then thanks to your encouraging words. Maybe we hit on something here. Thanks for the tip.

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      manatita44 22 months ago from london

      Short and sweet, Terry.

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      Terry Chestnutt 22 months ago from Cleveland, Ohio

      Sure thing, manatita44. Thanks.

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