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Snowflakes, A Haiku

Updated on December 15, 2011

Winter snowflakes

from the tropical south

wetly melt within my mouth.

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      Demas W Jasper 5 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Seven great comments, but this is technically not a Haiku (other than that it has 17 syllables and three lines). Nonetheless, mislabeled or not, I am glad it elicits your responses and ten feedbacks!

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      So nicely done!!

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      There we go again , and I was quite happy , that I also saw there are some great people here , to name a few Frank , Caroline. Etc.

      This is another nice Haiku , as I told Always Exploring yesterday I started researching different poems and the Haiku seems to be commanding the most attention.

      I like your style and you captured it with great simplicity.

      I 'll be reading.

      Thanks for you great and truthful comment on my comment to dear Caroline. I have come to realize that in these present times , the true essence of great living is all but a fading dream, and it's awfully sad , because the sppeed in which mankind is passing these virtues by, are the very same speed they will be later trying to find it "again" and that is sad.

      I call it a race to , nowhere.

      I will be writing quite a bit on these topics in the coming year because the need in me is now overwhelming , as I was the destruction of so many even very close ones.

      thanks you so much, and give thanks.

      Bless.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Simple and very beautiful.

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Very good.

      Even snowflakes need a vacation from the cold.

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Good one, now I see your into Haiku.

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      Theresa Ast 5 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Nice Haiku. Living in the deep south, we so seldom get any snow at all, so I am drawn to snow imagery and poetry. :)

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      Yes.. very good :)