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Some Luck Is Better Than… Well (limerick)

Updated on November 13, 2015

Each night game of lotto I’d play

Till finally luck came my way

Although just a token

For me luck had spoken

The machine was broken that day


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      Anthony Binks 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Crikey, that would be my luck right there... Another good one.

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      And it happens!

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      Suzette Walker 5 years ago from Taos, NM

      Great limerick! At least you can't loose any money! LOL These are so entertaining and creative!

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      Ann1Az2 5 years ago from Orange, Texas

      Poor guy - must be named Lucky.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 5 years ago from Reno NV

      Always entertaining and I am in need of a little cheering this evening. Thank you. Jamie

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      wetnosedogs 5 years ago from Alabama

      That's one way to hang on to your money. Very Funny.

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      b. Malin 5 years ago

      Cute and this Poem/Limerick, is a Winner!

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      picklesandrufus 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      Always look forward to your limericks! Can't loose with a broken machine!!

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      Marlene Bertrand 5 years ago from Northern California, USA

      Ha! For me, the machine is always broken. So funny. I really enjoyed it.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      If I'm sad, I know how to cheer up my self: Reading your limericks!

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      Lotto machines never works for me!

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      Redberry Sky 5 years ago

      Love it as always, mhatter99, you keep making me giggle :)

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      A great limmerick and thanks for sharing.


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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Lol, lol, wonderfully funny!! Enjoyed it, MH..... Keep it up :)

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      The Lord works in mysterious ways! another gem.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hahaha used to try my luck with lotto too..when i won, (well only 3 numbers)..all the outlets are closed because of heavy rains.

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      Rich 5 years ago from Kentucky

      Mh -

      The numbers that came up that night

      didn't match those he'd believed right

      exhaled relief

      instead of grief

      try again tonight he just might.

      Great job, sir! Enjoyed!

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      Linda Crist 5 years ago from Central Virginia

      Great job, rotten luck.

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 5 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      Hehehe! Winning that easy, eh!

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      Deborah 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Hey Mhatter, looks like the luck I always have in any kind of gambling! I gave up a long time ago. Great limerick, as usual, you are a very creative guy! Voted up!

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      sweethearts2 5 years ago from Northwest Indiana

      If you didn't have bad luck, you wouldn't have any luck. Just saying, you got lucky with this winning limerick.

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      You are, indeed, a winner!