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Some Other Time (poem)

Updated on September 11, 2012

What was it that my heart forgot to see

That cast you out to stand within the rain

Some other time such madness I’d restrain

Some other time I’d hold you close to me

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How could sweet love have blossomed into pain

What we set loose our future pays the fee

Some other time a kiss who would set us free

Some other time when nothing we’d explain

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Recall those times when laughter eased our fall

Those times when every tear was one of Joy

Some other time when we were in our prime

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Alone you cry now waiting for my call

Those raindrop now a memory destroy

While I am wishing for some other time

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      Faith Reaper 

      5 years ago from southern USA

      Mh, I missed this one, maybe when I was away in the hospital. I am glad I found it, although it makes the heart hurt and that video just adds to the tears falling. You were still on the kissing poetry, I see.

      Yes, remember when . . . time is a funny thing isn't it dear one.

      Voted Way up God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Ann1Az2 

      5 years ago from Orange, Texas

      Another tear jerker, M. Great song and picture.

      Well done and voted up.

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      Janhorner 

      6 years ago

      Love has a way of making us happy or sad. We have to move on from the pain and embrace new beginnings. Lovely,poem albeit tinged with sadness. A true poet you are.

      Jan

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      LaThing 

      6 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Aww.... Heartrending poem!! Crying can sometime ease the pain! Beautiful, MH!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is a sad one but beautiful in a yearning way...

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      Deb Hirt 

      6 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      I guess that's what falling out of love is all about.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 

      6 years ago from Nepal

      Deep and profound. Very Beautiful!

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      Angel_In_Disguise 

      6 years ago

      wow, unreal...great work !

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      Jools Hogg 

      6 years ago from North-East UK

      Sad and poignant. Sometimes thinking back is a pleasure, other times it feels like torture.

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      Rich 

      6 years ago from Kentucky

      Mh -

      Nuff said.

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      Graham Lee 

      6 years ago from Lancashire. England.

      A sad poem here today but excellent in your usual way.

      Graham.

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      Jose Velasquez 

      6 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      You can't keep living in the past, otherwise you will be doomed to be unhappy forever.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      MHatter.. Oh I love it and I am so sad too.. You know how to bring out the emotions in me.. that is a great poet that you are

      hugs and sharing

      Debbie

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      Suzette Walker 

      6 years ago from Taos, NM

      Sad yet poignant. I love the photo you chose to go with this poem. My heart breaks for this type of situation. The flow of the poem, sonnet, is beautiful.

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      Randi Benlulu 

      6 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Beautiful and sad. Or maybe resolved? Really liked this along with the picture and song. Thank you! Up and beautiful!

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