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Original Poem: "Song of Silence" with Commentary

Updated on August 1, 2018
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Writing poetry became my major composing activity circa 1962, and taking a creative writing class in 1963-64 deepened my growing interest.

Pain

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Introduction and Text of "Song of Silence"

Is life not about losing? Well, yes, among other things, but losing something is always at least a possibility. A lover, a job, a parent or other loved one, even one’s identity, nowadays, a husband, a wife, a home—the list goes on and on.

The question to address is, how does one cope with loss?: The answer is, by realizing that there is no such thing. There is no loss, there is only change of situation. And that is the challenge of living on this planet: how to proceed with any change.

Song of Silence

Your silence has begun to sing to her again
in the voice of her old poem, "To Love Pain":
"I can lose you again and again
And my heart will beat back stronger
As it is lashed by the whip of your absence."

She did not recognize You in April:
She mistook You for a young man
come to swim in her eyes, touch her lips,
and part the warm sea silt that opens for lovers.
And she slid down and down into that primal ooze
that has kept her hide-bound.

But now that You have hidden that body of mud
and have silenced that voice that lured her lust,
She sees Your body of light dancing
on rivers of words meandering through her soul.
She hears Your astral singing
in every silver syllable of pure vibration.

O Divine Singer, she comes to You alone
to sing her song and to devote
every last ounce of flesh and bone.

Commentary

The atheistic response to pain and suffering leaves a great deal to be desired. Imagine that there is simply nothing that can help you after you have experienced the death of your spouse or child or the loss of your job and home. That pain is real; as a human being you are suffering, maybe to the point of suicide. Do you really believe that killing the body will kill the pain felt in the mind?

Might there be another level of awareness that will assuage that pain? If you think not, then you haven’t really suffered, you’ve likely just been annoyed. And annoyance is nothing like suffering, as everyone will ultimately understand. "God works in mysterious ways" is not a claim made by a fool.

First Movement: Departure of Affection

Your silence has begun to sing to her again
in the voice of her old poem, "To Love Pain":
"I can lose You again and again
And my heart will beat back stronger
As it is lashed by the whip of Your absence."

The speaker is reporting a situation experienced by a third party: a poet who once declared an emotional effusion in "her old poem." The poet had lost friendship and/or affection but appears to have a support system that few do. This speaker offers a quotation from a poem that the poet had penned earlier on and that thought from the poem seems to have lifted the poet's speaker above the ordinary travesty of losing a loved one.

Apparently, the speaker of that earlier poem had claimed that she can lose "You" many times and still remain strong. She had been "lashed by the whip of" the absence of the loved one. This absence will not defeat that speaker but cause her to assert a greater strength than before.

Second Movement: Divine Stalker

She did not recognize You in April:
She mistook You for a young man
come to swim in her eyes, touch her lips,
and part the warm sea silt that opens for lovers.
And she slid down and down into that primal ooze
that has kept her hide-bound.

The speaker then reveals that that earlier speaker in the poet's poem had engaged in a likely clandestine relationship, but she is not addressing a human being; she is addressing her Divine Beloved (Divine Mother), whom she also calls "Divine Singer." She knows that the Divine Beloved (Divine Mother) comes to each created soul in many ways at many times over the course the soul’s existence—which is infinite and eternal.

Mistaking the Divine Beloved for a temporal human lover is a common occurrence: such mistaking is done every second of every day. Mayic delusion stalks the human heart and mind more tenaciously than any human stalker. And the human heart that succumbs to human interaction is forced to learn about the Divine Reality behind the human lover or friend. Forced to acknowledge that Ultimate Reality becomes the entire raison d'être of the intense sufferer, that suffering human heard and mind finally becomes convinced that the Divine Balm is the only medicine that cures.

Third Movement: First, Crying; Then, Praying

But now that You have hidden that body of mud
and have silenced that voice that lured her lust,
She sees Your body of light dancing
on rivers of words meandering through her soul.
She hears Your astral singing
in every silver syllable of pure vibration.

This movement might be titled, “The Efficacy of Loss,” for it is because of the “loss" that each human sufferer ultimately looks for a balm. Human pain and suffering can be intense. Note that humans respond to pain and suffering in their on ways. From crying to praying. And all points in between.

But the purpose of pain is merely a "prod to remembrance," as the Divine Voice once averred. Remembering that each human child of God is the Divine Soul and not the conglomeration of mud that composes the lust-filled physical encasement is the fact of existence that heals all wounds.

Fourth Movement: The Permanent Balm for Pain

O Divine Singer, she comes to You alone
to sing her song and to devote
every last ounce of flesh and bone.

After all the whining and pitying oneself for the pain and suffering one is undergoing, one finally realizes that the only way to ensure that pain and suffering will not afflict one again is to unite with one’s Creator. If one has a Creator, would it not be efficacious to unite with It. If one does not, — if we all are the result of accident — then what?

The Atheist’s Prayer

"O, beloved Accident! Thanks but no thanks! I'll just wing it!” Good luck, Little Bird!

Divine Mother

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© 2016 Linda Sue Grimes

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  • Maya Shedd Temple profile imageAUTHOR

    Linda Sue Grimes 

    2 years ago from U.S.A.

    Thank you, Venkatachari! I appreciate your kind words.

  • Venkatachari M profile image

    Venkatachari M 

    2 years ago from Hyderabad, India

    Very interesting post with deep intellectual thoughts. The commentary is greatly done describing the essence of the song in detail.

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