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Sorrow Poem

Updated on May 24, 2010

Dark Hours




I cried

Long hours howl

Brother what happened

Gone you left me with an empty bowl

I wish I could turn back the time

Angrily sad

Crazily disappointed

Hopelessly confused

Cannot accepted

That black sack


A real nightmare not a dream...

thousand cuts on my heart

thousand stabs on my stomach

Numb and pain

Helplessly weakened

Staring at you alone

the darkest hours

the endless sorrow pain

Pain and numb

A deep hole in my heart

A black hole in my life

Lost ...

In my dreams I asked

but You never told why you left

Cannot describe what I felt

For I wished I could have done something

If I could ..

I would exchange place with you

May peace be with you..


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      elyosa 6 years ago

      lovely ...

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      bekaze 7 years ago from Germany

      thank you all for reading and commenting

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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      Nice write!

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      ek ellis 7 years ago

      Deep poem

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      BJBenson 7 years ago from USA

      This was a very engaging poem. Very nice.