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Soul Sacrifice

Updated on April 28, 2012

To express these words... My heart don't know how

what I want to say... my hands will write now.

My minds feelings ...what my eyes see

It's put it down these pages.. it's you and me.


This will be my poem to you

the words, you know to be true

how I write, will be so nice

this will be my Soul Sacrifice


Let me start with my emotions

they run wild, it is true

but if Love, is so wild

I will run wild... just for you

Our emotional love.. there to keep

our passionate love..runs so deep


Your picture.. it is mine to hold

it'll keep me warm... when I am cold

it makes me happy.. when I am blue

knowing I have... your true love too.


When the birds sing in the tree's

they sing of the love

between you and me

The long night has came and went

I thought about the love we sent,

to each other from yesterday

how we laughed, loved and played

The words I have tried... to make so nice

My heart is yours...now this is my Soul Sacrifice





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    • Perspycacious profile image

      Demas W Jasper 5 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Good effort. I'm sure she will be happy that you wrote this. Beautiful. Who says "men have trouble expressing themselves!"?

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      SanneL 5 years ago from Sweden

      Michael. . .your soul and heart reflects your beautiful mind in this enchanting and captivating poem. So lovely, so pure, so seductive. . .wow!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Perspycaciuos, thanks for the comment. glad you like the poem . your last write was very good too.

      @ Sanne, my lovely, your words of praise are special. thank you for the comments. hope it touched your heart.

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      Voronwe 5 years ago

      This is such a beautifully expressed poem - Michael! There's something indefinable, deep and pure in this Love you've painted here! It's got me thinking...thanks.

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      Say you would sacrifice your soul? That covers a lot of territory. For you are a 'soul man'!

      Votes!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      voronwe, thank you, I hope i have brought joy to your heart. thank you for your support and kind comments.

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      Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Love, it never grows old, and the most exciting pain we ever felt. You have expressed it well.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ann, you are so kind with your words.

      thank you my sweet little ann. You are the best.I really appreciate your support.

    • cleaner3 profile image
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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Jackie, thank you for your support. love is always excitng although it does hurt sometimes.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is so touching, Beautifully written. This is one of your best..Thank you..

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ruby, thank you for the kind words. you are one of my loyal followers. happy you like my poem

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Very beautiful, Michael, amazing word images, sincere and sweet!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ahh... my little kooky bird. aren't you up late?

      thanks for reading my sweet. missed you

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      LChristiane 5 years ago from Florida

      "my soul sacrifice"....how beautifully powerful is that phrase? Very, very, very.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Letterina, I have missed you on my hubs. You always c

      ome to my hubs first when you return to the pages.

      Thank you my beautiful Dancer.

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      ozobriones 5 years ago from Garden Grove

      so im guesing people here like love poems more?

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      ozobriones, yes some some don't. there is a lot of diverse poems here. the people are viry fickle. thanks for commenting

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      Annie Fenn 5 years ago from Australia

      The ultimate "soul sacrifice", beautifully expressed by the ulimate love poet - you, Cleaner :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Annie, thank you my sweet Annie, you are the best and may the lord look down on you and brighten your dayswith the finest love.

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      Ruchira 5 years ago from United States

      wow, this was utterly pure yet seductive. voted up as awesome and beautiful, cleaner3

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      Jen Christopherson 5 years ago from Oklahoma, USA

      Beautiful and lovely!!!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ruchira, thank you for your kind words and your support. very happy you like the poem.

      @Dreamer, thanks dreamer, your comments are welcome always.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      "Your picture.. it is mine to hold

      it'll keep me warm... when I am cold

      it makes me happy.. when I am blue

      knowing I have... your true love too."

      Beautiful expression of love coming from a man of a heartfelt poetic soul!

      Hat's off Sir!

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Ceaner3, such passion expressed here. Lovely. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      rahul, thank you my friend, your support is appreciated very much. those are my defining lines of my love for her, but sadly all i have is her picture.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Why is that Sir? If I may ask!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      To answer you is hard.

      We are apart and only communicate at the behest of the lord. only her picture keeps me from falling into the depths of despair. but i have faith in the lords work that we will be together someday. I write these poems for all the beauties who are without their men and long for his love. I hope my words give faith to all who long for their love, for without faith we all are lost. thanks for listening.

      Michael

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Faith reaper , thank you for commenting and for your kind words. i try to evoke the passion.

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      laurathegentleman 5 years ago from Chapel Hill, NC

      I'm sorry all you have is her picture... I think she'd want you to know that you have far more than that, but perhaps it can't all be spoken at this moment... I'm speculating, but I'll bet she loves you back.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Laura, thank you for your words of hope and your kind comments. yes i'm sure that she knows i have her love to keep me going.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      I just love it when a man is prepared to sacrifice all for love. Beautiful and very touching. Voting up

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      cleaner3 5 years ago

      to biz, thank you for folllowing my work. much appreciated.

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ....I would imagine the ultimate compliment that anyone could give a writer is to say I wish I could write like that or I wish I wrote that one - well that is what

      I am saying here - I wish I could write like you - I struggle myself and would not call myself a writer at all - or even a poet - but you my friend has a style full of grace and finesse which someone people would take a lifetime to master and yet you make it look/read so effortlessly and that is a god given talent you have.

      Greetings from lake erie time 7:39pm and sending warm wishes and good energy your way -

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      my friend epigramman,

      to recieve a compliment like that from you sir, is very rare indeed. I am very humbled by your words of praise.

      the talent of my wordsmithing comes from my heart and the good lords hand . he is my main inspiration, for his power is uncomparable and I am truly blessed that he has shown me the way, and helps me battle my demons. thank you for visiting my hub. god bless you.

      Michael Montoya - Pueblo,Colorado time, 7:30 PM

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      Erin Bower 5 years ago from Georgia

      This is a lovely, heartfelt poem. I really like how you ended it with its title. I voted this up and beautiful. :)

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      how i wish your love will always run wild and create a magnificent poem...

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      KDuBarry03 5 years ago

      When I first read the title, and the first two stanzas, I had a feeling this poem would be darker and more from spite; however, I was wrong in that interpretation. It goes to show how some people look at the word "sacrifice" as something dark and last resort, but you totally used the word in a different way that was misleading and very satisfactory. Well done! I voted up.

      Great Poem!

      -KD

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ raci , thank you for your support.

      @Kdu, thanks for commenting. glad you liked the poem

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