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Soup Love!

Updated on October 15, 2014

beware of beauties...

Goaded recklessly

by a lightening love

thundered I heavily

few and some words of desire

into her unreceptive ears

which tweaked

her sensitive nose

that wired

her fiery eyes

to heartlessly holocaust

the self of mine

into

a wasted ash!

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      Marvin Parke 2 years ago from Jamaica

      That sounds interesting. A very peculiar way to express disappointment.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx Ras

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      intense piece--I like the way you referenced ash!

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx aud

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