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Spaces Between Us

Updated on February 26, 2014
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Anan is an online blogger and private consultant since 2009 in the areas of relationships and interfaith spirituality.

Spaces Between Us

Another day floating in your memories,

another flashback of a distant moment.

The absolute proof that we were one.

The proof that in spite of all, you were mine.


Time and space got in the way.

Time and life tore us apart.

When hate was so difficult to swallow,

when pain was so great that left us hollow.


Don't dwell in foolish pursuits of impossibles

Don't stay trapped in the chambers of yesterday

That is, if you and I were meant to be together

That is, if things were different, I would have stayed forever.


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© 2012 Anan Celeste

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      Anan Celeste 4 years ago from California

      Thanks web23.

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      Bill Blackburn 4 years ago from Twentynine Palms, California

      A beautiful poem! Time heals all; it's just a matter of how much time!

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      Anan Celeste 5 years ago from California

      Indeed Docmo;

      Is a bad habit, isn't it? Sometimes waking old ghosts, just for the sake of art. Then the bitterness of an old wound becomes anew again.

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      Mohan Kumar 5 years ago from UK

      I like what you said in the comment: I opened old wounds for the sake of art. We do that dont we, and out pours such emotional and evocative poetry. Love the title and the cadence of the poem. well done- voted up!

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      Anan Celeste 5 years ago from California

      I am so sorry Michael, It was not my intention to worry you. I am fine, those poems are part of my creative process.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      anan, you are loved on these pages. if you need words of support . please reach out we will give you love . the Lord will help you get through whatever ails you.

      Love

      michael

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      Anan Celeste 5 years ago from California

      Thanks Blossom! Much appreciated.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A beautiful poem, but so sad. Shakespeare wrote, "parting is such sweet sorrow," sorrow, yes, but I'm not so sure about the sweet bit, it can hurt so much. So well written.

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      Anan Celeste 5 years ago from California

      I just have opened old wounds for the sake of my art. My smile still masks what I don't want others to know. But apparently, is difficult to fool those that suffer too. thanks cleaner!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      My lovely Anan, where does this sadness come from.? I see you have changed your profile pic to a sad one . I love you. I want to see that beautiful smile again. I can see from your poetry that there has been a change . It is awesomme poem but it is full of sadness. No, no ,No .

      Love Michael