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Spark in Your Eyes - a Poem

Updated on October 4, 2019
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Rinita is a creative writer, with focus on poetry. She delves into several forms including Haiku/Senryu, Sonnets, Free Verse, and Prose.

Background

For once, I am not explaining my poem. This is an "As you like it" poem.

Sparkling eyes
Sparkling eyes | Source

The Poem

Dew on a rose petal

Sunshine on the sill

A merry tune in passing

A cloud over the hill


The spark in your eyes

Mystically glows along

Shadows of the flecks

That the gleam beautifies


Wind over the ocean

The wild exotic Eden

Gulls flying low and swift

Chastity of a maiden


The spark in your eyes

Sets ablaze all sin

Glitters turn to gold

As the flame never dies


The path to paradise

The touch of an angel

The rising ceremony

The flute of a miracle


The spark in your eyes

Leads me to the light

Of a blissful eternity

Where a soul never cries


© 2012 Rinita Sen

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    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      LOL. Good one!!

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      Chris Mills 

      7 years ago from Green Bay, Wisconsin...for now

      I don't know why that impulse came to me but I had Lucinda Williams doing the vocals. Way too weird, I know.

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      That's a very interesting comment cam8510! As I read your comment, I tried to rap those lines I wrote above!!!

      Thanks for reading, have a nice day!

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      Chris Mills 

      7 years ago from Green Bay, Wisconsin...for now

      As I read this, I was remembering going to a poetry "reading" and being surprised. The authors were also performers. They "read" their works, but often very aggressively. Reading yours, I found myself reading it almost as hip hop or rap, with and aggressiveness. That may sound strange, but it fit pretty well for me. Thanks for sharing your poetry.

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thanks again Shruti. I am glad you feel that way about my poetry.

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      shruti sheshadri 

      7 years ago from Bangalore, India

      I am reading all your poems and I am astounded at its simplicity and yet it has such deep meaning...

      The spark in your eyes

      Sets ablaze all sin

      Glitters turn to gold

      As the flame never dies

      Beautiful... Truly :)

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      IntegrityYes 

      7 years ago

      You are very welcome,awesome lady.

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thanks a million for your vote. Glad you liked it.

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      IntegrityYes 

      7 years ago

      I definitely voted up! That is another awesome one.

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thanks a lot penny. Happy you liked it.

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      pennyofheaven 

      7 years ago from New Zealand

      Elegantly beautiful. Thank you

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Lot. Glad you liked it.

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Debbie. Have a blessed day.

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      Lot Rillera 

      7 years ago from Philippines

      lovely and beautiful ! good work

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      7 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      It is beautiful just the way it is.. I LOVE IT...

      Blessings and sharing

      Debbie

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thanks a lot. Glad you enjoyed it.

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      tippusunu 

      7 years ago from India

      oh, that was great, i really love you writing, thanks

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Lady. Glad you liked it.

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      Joanna Chandler 

      7 years ago from On Planet Earth

      Very lovely Poem

      Peace be unto you

      ~~~Shalom~~~

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thank you lyricwriter for your kind comment. Am glad you enjoyed the poem. Have a great day!

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      Richard Ricky Hale 

      7 years ago from West Virginia

      Senoritaa, beautiful poem. You truly have a way with words, such a great talent. Great work.

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Frank. Glad you liked it. Have a wonderful day.

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      Frank Atanacio 

      7 years ago from Shelton

      Senoritaa you just made beauty stand still I loved it!!!

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Audrey. Glad to see you today.

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      Audrey Howitt 

      7 years ago from California

      Beautiful pairing of verse and picture---

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thank you writer20. So glad you liked it.

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      Joyce Haragsim 

      7 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Wonderful poem to read about nature and love.

      Vote up and beautiful.

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thanks a lot Sue. Glad to see you today.

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      Sueswan 

      7 years ago

      Hi Senoritaa

      Beautiful and precious. Lovely imagery.

      Voted up and away

      Take care :)

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thank you for that generous comment, Robert. I am glad you liked it.

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      rOBERT hEWETT SR. 

      7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Beautiful imagery, rhythm and flow. I love the spark in your writing. Bob

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thanks sofs for thinking so. Am glad you liked this one. You have a great day too.

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thanks a lot Phoebe for that priceless comment. Have a wonderful day!

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      Sophie 

      7 years ago

      Oh wow... what a reminder of this beautiful world and beyond... Love and heaven in your words. Have a lovely day.

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      Phoebe Pike 

      7 years ago

      A work of art in every way a poem ever could be! Two thumbs way up. ^_^

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      You are right in saying that love is as beautiful as nature. Thank you Rosemay!

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      Rosemary Sadler 

      7 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Sweet and lovely and lighthearted. Love is as enduring and beautiful as nature itself.

      Loved your poem

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Vinaya for that beautiful comment. I am glad my poem could do that. Have a nice day!

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thank you Raci, I am glad I chose the right pictures. Have a great day!

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      Vinaya Ghimire 

      7 years ago from Nepal

      I see the beautiful world through your wonderful composition.

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      raciniwa 

      7 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      what a beautiful and inspiring poem...love this Senoritaa...the views are awesome as well...

    • Senoritaa profile imageAUTHOR

      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Thank you my HP friend. You said it all. :)

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      7 years ago from Southern Illinois

      You've described the beauty of nature, a true love, and perhaps heaven..Beautiful...

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