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Spills afloor!

Updated on August 25, 2014

gather!

disseminate...

  • Mangying

tricks on

every man

who came my way

ended I

a butty mangy stooge!




  • Sought I

the aid of asclepius

to heal the wound

in mind and heart

of the sick world!




  • Paraphrasing

my complex life

to my present beau

simplified I

my compounded love!




  • Life

is so simple

to get complicated

in a compound!




  • Every facet of life

rosettes

a value each

that gets socketed

in the heart closet!

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      W1totalk 3 years ago

      Wise words and interesting ideas of the complexities of life.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thank you w1

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      A great poem which shows off your talent at its best.

      Here's to so many more to come from you and enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thanku ed

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Interesting poem. I thought it was going to be about 'spilling the beans!'

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      its about spilled thoughts blo

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      Ronnie wrenchBiscuit 3 years ago

      Yes ,this was entertaining.I found the funniest line to be "butty mangy stooge",and the prettiest verse to be last.The bullets along with the stark images create a clinical feel that was unexpected, and in my experience unusual; appealing in the way that the coldness of an emergency room can be so beautifully balanced by a hot-blooded nurse wearing pink lipstick,too much eyeliner, and a tight, white uniform.

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      Dianna Mendez 3 years ago

      Very well done! I love your play on words coupled with the photos.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnq so much tea

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thanku wren for your valuable comments

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      C E Clark 3 years ago from North Texas

      Interesting.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thanku au

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Great play on words!

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      thnx gyp

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