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Brighter than the Sun

Updated on November 9, 2011
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I am an artist, designer, photographer and writer. See more of my work on cmariearts.


Honor yourself

And your body

In your weakest times

Go deep within

You will find strength there

Know that you are not alone

Beauty lies from within

Strength that you never knew you had

And in sweet silence

There will creep up a light

Quietly at first

And ever so gently

It will grow to be

So intense

Brighter than the sun

It will shine through you

With penetrating heat

It will heal your limbs

And you will see who you

Truly are

Freedom lies ahead of you

One that you have never seen

To not see it

Would be a

Spiritual sin.


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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Thank you Dream. :)

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      dreamseeker2 5 years ago

      Very nice! I liked this poem. It made one appreciate themselves for who they are. Voted up! : )

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Cutter I am very spiritual that's true. I do meditation and yoga. Yes I am familiar with the chakras and kundalini. I was trying to capture a spiritual enlightening and yes kundalini and the chakras aligning could be that. The light inside could be interpreted as the kundalini life force. Thank you for your great understanding and comments!

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      jami l. pereira 6 years ago

      Beautiful write ! voted up awesome and beautiful ! thanks for sharing :)

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Thanks Kimberly!

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      kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

      BRAVO!!!!! I SAY

      Thanks for sharing this with us

      voted up and throughout the universe

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Thank you both Vinaya and Dinkan53 for your comments. :)

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      dinkan53 6 years ago from India

      Started reading your composition, remember a famous quote "You cannot believe in honor until you have achieved it. Better keep yourself clean and bright: you are the window through which you must see the world" by Sir Walter Besant.

      I like this hub because it is perfect with a nice photo, great writings and an awesome video. thanks, bookmarking it for further reference. Voted^^

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      Vinaya Ghimire 6 years ago from Nepal

      Thanks for following me. Before following you back I wanted to read you. To not see you, it would be a spiritual sin.

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      It seems my spiritual poems are very popular. I will write more of them. Thank you epi.

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ...back for a re-visit of a classic by you - with my morning coffee at lake erie time 9:16am - and still one of the greatest titles of all time - so simple but yet so magnificent , well just like your writing!

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Thanks so much epi! What an honor! You are a great poet as well. :)

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ...well I really love the title - and I too thought what can live up to that title - the hype and the promise? - well, the words lived up to that title - your poetic choice of words and how you weaved them into this celebration of life and living and knowing oneself - I must celebrate with you on this one and post its beauty to my Facebook page with a direct link back here - and yes another hubbravo from the epi-man!!

      lake erie time ontario canada 1:20am

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Thank you for your comment ubanichijoke. :)

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 6 years ago from Lagos

      Thanks for this uplifting verse. We all hope to see the sun shine brighter in our lives. Thanks

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Thank you Mr. Happy for your comment. It brought a smile to my face. :)

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      Mr. Happy 6 years ago from Toronto, Canada

      Okay, so I didn't wait until I came back from my travels to check-out your work.

      I saw the title of this poem and since I love the Sun so much, I though: "What's brighter than the sun?"

      You're right though, the Light within is brighter. It is a Spiritual Light. It is a beautiful Light, in my opinion and one can call on It at any time.

      Awesome poem! May Wakan Tanka guide your path. Cheers!

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      I'm glad you liked it icciev. :)

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      icciev 6 years ago from Kuwait

      very encouraging, love the poems that give you more hope. thanks Carolin for sharing and voted up.