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Spring Rhyme…..

Updated on July 12, 2012
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“Spring Rhyme…..”

Crystal clear rain drops...
Flowing into my heart.....

Rains made my soul wet,

They made my passion sweat.

Rains tease my tears,

reminds me the lost fears.

Thy embraced and ...asked not to fear

as rain wet us both till the core,

you promised aloud...witness was the rain

to walk till the end of the road.


Rains stroked my soul....
with you they made me whole.
……………………………….
Rain drops smiled on my lips….
And hummed a Green lullaby,
…………………………………..
Spring’s been dripping down my wet hair…
Thy smelled so earthy…!
………………………………
Rain drops were reading me…..and
Cloud danced with the spring rhyme.
Rain o’ Rain flow into me….
…kill me once again…!

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you@spy for your kind visit here and kind words as well:-)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      the beauty of spring and rains comes out on this beautiful work.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you for your comment IntegrityYes:-)

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      IntegrityYes 5 years ago

      The raindrops are falling on my head! HAH-HAH!

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ TIMETRAVELER2

      for your humble words......

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      thank you @cloud explorer...i don't know how to add pix or video to my hub as I don have that much time to explore...in between my so many work i just add my writings here. your guidance is most thoughtful. will try to follow aka learn the things :-)

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      Sondra Rochelle 5 years ago from USA

      I could actually feel the rain falling on me as I read this. Nice work.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      thank you deep metaphysical.....for your comment.....its great that you stopped by and read. yes my words, sentences tend to be personal as these are all about feelings. i tend to express my feelings only and i am really grateful that you are naming them as poems:-)

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      I actually love the rain as well, each drop hols a deep significance and connection to our life we have here, lovely poem keep up the good work on it all, maybe add imagery for added flair, and possible a video.

      I like searching on vimeo for cool intro videos to begin my poems, but any will do if they match the overall theme. Good Luck! and thanks for reading my hubs recently