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Stars Of My Forever (poem)

Updated on May 21, 2013

The stars of my forever waiting there

They float amidst the heaven of my soul

What mists of passion’s wonder they extol

Upon soft mood this scent which fills the air


Their promise of surrender makes me whole

To follow immortality obtain

In realms which dreams are needed to explain

Why my heartbeats are under their control


I never know what heights I could attain

Or found such meaning hidden in a stare

That all else simply passes unaware

The stars of my forever’s sweet refrain


And though some clouds may steal away skies

They cannot dim my stars within your eyes


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      thost 4 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

      Great sonnet Martin.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      The beautiful melody of love lingers on...

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. This is so wonderful. Passing it on.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Lovely poem and sooo romantic.

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina


      It is awesome how the universe works. Today, Hubeditors sent me a list of all those I am following which makes it so much easier to find new work by my favorites. The theme that has emerged today in following my favorites is on the one hand: dark and filled with intrigue while on the other: romance and sensuality. This poem makes me blush. Pure sensuality. Thank You.

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Mhatter99....beautifully placed words...feeling the love means more than the love itself...the video added set the bar even higher...enjoyed..

      as usual.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      This is how I see love should be. Very romantic, Martin!

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      Such imaginative words could not come from a mere mortal.

      Do you soar far above the earth in the darkness of the night?

      A wondrous write.

      Thank you for sharing.


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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      So very romantic! 'And though some clouds may steal away skies. They cannot dim my stars within your eyes' - ahhhh, beautiful! Love it!

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      Beautiful words.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      A lovely poem the stars in ones eyes will always shine and with such greatness

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Such a nice poem....the photo, the video all are so beautifully done....Thanks for this one.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Wow, Mh, this is a really beautiful one here! I love it. Might be my new favorite! Such lovely words expressed. And the music video is moving.

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      God bless you. In His Love Always, Faith Reaper