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Star’s Whisper (poem)

Updated on August 17, 2013

What star has brought this feeling over me

My heart my soul excited by a tune

I’m taken by a wind of ecstasy

To heavens dreams and wishes do commune

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Each ticking of a lifetime thrills the air

It’s hard to keep my dance upon the ground

My place in fantasy has opened there

One thought one pulse has captured all around

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The world I knew now very far away

I thought I knew the colors of Joy’s song

But all I knew would sing a brighter day

When melody eternal came along

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What star has set this once was me aflame

The star which was the whisper of your name

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      Wayne Barrett 

      5 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Very nice Martin.

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      Deb Hirt 

      5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      When one gives up their dreams, they are too old to see them.

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      Victor W. Kwok 

      5 years ago from Hawaii

      Amazing poetry, mhatter99!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Another beautiful peom..Music brings back so many wonderful memories....

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      Jackie Lynnley 

      5 years ago from The Beautiful South

      I think most of my first poems come from songs. They talk to our hearts. Very beautiful.

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      Rosemary Sadler 

      5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Such a beautifully romantic poem Martin. I love this song and Westside Story

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 

      5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Beautifully expressed. Love your poem and the romantic thoughts it conjures.

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      Linda Crampton 

      5 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      This is such a beautiful poem, Martin. The imagery is wonderful! I love your romance poetry.

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      5 years ago from Central Florida

      This is so beautiful, Martin. If only everyone could feel this way all the time....

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      DJ Anderson 

      5 years ago

      So romantic....a beautiful expression of eternal love.

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      Devika Primić 

      5 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      A great light to the soul and so beautifully written

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      FlourishAnyway 

      5 years ago from USA

      Truly a beautiful poem, Martin. You you such a way with words.

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