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Store Bought Version

Updated on August 11, 2017


I want the girl who is all natural


You can keep your walking plastic


I want the girl with an original world


Not the one spoiled in your static



A smile that pictures are worth taking


Not the smiles that are painted on


The smile that is already in the making


Not the smile that is two shades of wrong



Keep your girl who is a store bought versions


I’ll keep the girl with the deep conversations



You can keep the face that can show no emotion


I’ll keep the girl who has complete control


Keep the face that has no working motion


I’ll take the girl whose face will someday turn old



Take the girl who wants to look like the cover of a magazine


I’ll have the girl who reads the sports page


You can have the girl who is “as seen on T.V.”


The girl I want is the one who is not on the main stage



Keep your girl who is a store bought version


I’ll keep the girl with the conversation



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    • tammyswallow profile image

      Tammy 

      6 years ago from North Carolina

      It is so admirable to hear a fellow of your age seeking a beautiful, natural woman. In the famous words of the great "Sir Mix Alot", silicone parts are made for toys. :) This is beautiful!

    • Fullerman5000 profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan Fuller 

      6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      thank you all so much for the feedback and the kind words. i would love to thank each one of yall personally but im short on time. Thanks for the hub love people.

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      Rev Bruce S Noll HMN 

      6 years ago from Asheville NC

      I liked it Fullerman5000,

      The cool part, from my perspective, is there is an expression of an ideal. The writer knows what he's looking for and also what he's not looking for. I'd say he already has someone in mind!

      Thank You!

    • K. Burns Darling profile image

      Kristen Burns-Darling 

      6 years ago from Orange County, California

      Beauty that is only skin deep will fade rather quickly, beauty that comes from inside, will last a lifetime. I loved this. Shared and posted to my Facebook wall. Voted up, useful, awesome, beautiful and interesting.

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      Alastar Packer 

      6 years ago from North Carolina

      Nice poem Fullerman. Real beats unreal every time.

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      raciniwa 

      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      i agree with you on that...inner beauty stands out and lasts long...

    • Simplicity4All profile image

      Simplicity4All 

      6 years ago from Rhode Island, USA

      This is great! Voted up and stuff its nice to know there are still people who realize physical beauty isnt all there is and while it may seem important to only focus on physical attributes to people if there is nothing but a blank slate to back it up than thats not that beautiful now is it??

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      StricktlyDating 

      6 years ago from Australia

      That's really sweet (I say as I smile with my Botox smile!)

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      Dora Weithers 

      6 years ago from The Caribbean

      Beautiful! I admire you for preferring the original, natural girl. Your last two lines are the winner.

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      excellent work. a unique take on a cliched topic. very enjoyable read! up and shared

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      P. Thorpe Christiansen 

      6 years ago from Pacific Northwest, USA

      Love this--especially the lines: Keep your girl who is a store bought version, I'll keep the girl with the conversation. Well done.

    • Fullerman5000 profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan Fuller 

      6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      thanks for popping by mlj. glad you liked it.

    • mljdgulley354 profile image

      mljdgulley354 

      6 years ago

      Just depends on where you're looking! This was a great read. I do smile at the thought you are looking for someone who is real.

    • Fullerman5000 profile imageAUTHOR

      Ryan Fuller 

      6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Its tough to find now these days. thanks for reading.

    • Tony the writer profile image

      Tony the writer 

      6 years ago from Birmingham, England

      Well, I want one too!

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