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Story Of Heartbreak~poem

Updated on June 14, 2015

Across the Universe by The Beatles

Story of Heartbreak.......


During my time with you-

I was often left unglued

For your lack of emotion

drove me a feeling

your lack of devotion-

hurt me really bad

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Now I feel that hurt

when I think of

your uniqueness...

but this new hurt

is NOT worse than the old hurt-

and will dissipate with time

SO I REALIZE THAT THIS HURT WILL GO AWAY WITH TIME

SO I REALIZE THAT THIS HURT WILL GO AWAY WITH TIME

***************

I loved you for many things a long time ago but

the memories of how you BeHaVeD linger on my mind

My idea of you, my FANTASY - IS NOT REAL.

I should just LET THIS FEELING GO AWAY ; IT'S OKAY...

My memories may never die but I must move on and not

continue to lie to myself

 

To see you plainly as you are: flawed, Just A Man

Not the one for me

I may cry many a night..I may even plea

to God

But like I say the pain will dissipate with time

But like I say the pain will dissipate with time

My life has meaning now and freedom now and I'm in charge of Me.

My life is in my own hands now, It's my own responsibility

 

When I was with you

you overlooked my emotions

you let me cry for hours

you didn't make up before bed

you let me fester thoughts in my head

I didn't really know you

You had me constantly trying to

figure you out

When I was with you

You overlooked my feelings

You let me cry for hours

How much worse.................................

could it have gotten?????

How do you describe Heartbreak?

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      Rosemary Amrhein 6 years ago from Boston, MA

      LOL LOL

      Funny!!

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      sligobay 6 years ago from east of the equator

      I think it means: Nothings gonna change my world; but then again, it could mean, "let's go skinny dipping in the Ganges". LOL

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      Rosemary Amrhein 6 years ago from Boston, MA

      Hey,

      I don't even know what Jai guru deva means!

      ThankYOU

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      sligobay 6 years ago from east of the equator

      Jai Guru Deva, Om. Thank you for this video with lyrics which I have never seen, Nothing's gonna change my world. You have worked through much of your pain with the acceptance of these words. Sorry for the pain visited upon you by your partner. We men are so callous so often. This is a superior Hub and honest poetry.

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      Rosemary Amrhein 6 years ago from Boston, MA

      Thankyou, Little Kim.

      no comment...trying to ignore this hub! And as you said heal. thanks

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      Little Kim 6 years ago from Any town U.S.A.

      Wow! How many votes for earth shattering! Loved the hub! Sounds like my heartbreak just in different words. Pian is universal. Hope you have healed and will no more describe a love like this.

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      Rosemary Amrhein 6 years ago from Boston, MA

      AA,

      thankyou

      Thankyou,bb

      Mentalist acer- :)

      Thanks Kashmir, I heard it recently and I love it too. I kinda thought it fit..love the abstract words..

      Hi Cardisa,

      crazy? probably so. Yes he did make me crazy- not healthy relationship.

      Hope I can move on now..........thx

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      Carolee Samuda 6 years ago from Jamaica

      Hey Blondie....I see you are kinda crazy(in a good way) like me. I see you screamed out this one. Just the thought of him made you CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!

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      Thomas Silvia 6 years ago from Massachusetts

      Hi Rose, Loved the awesome poem and Beatles video, i always loved that song !

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      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      I've heard said one never matures without having had a broken heart.;)

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      Sorry for your pain Rosie. Lovely poem. Loved the beatle video...

      Happy to have you back...

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      Augustine A Zavala 6 years ago from Texas

      An aching, soulful lament.