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Strokes Upon A Heart (tanka)

Updated on September 4, 2013

Searching for a voice

Which was heard so long ago

Strokes upon a heart

Just to find it always there

Drowned out by a world of noise


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      Shauna L Bowling 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Sometimes you need to close your eyes and shut the world out in order to hear. Love this, Martin.

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      I love your ability to capture just the moment.

      Kim

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      Anna Haven 3 years ago from Scotland

      Interesting and poignant. I also thought your choice of photograph was brilliant, and matched perfectly.

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      Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Great words!

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      Laura L Scotty 3 years ago from Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania

      I needed the picture to tell me the meaning behind the words. Good one.

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      Leona J Atkinson 3 years ago from Oregon, USA

      Very good poem and picture!

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Indeed, indeed. Nice work Martin.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Loved this, The picture tells the story well...

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      That picture was so perfect.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      What an amazing image! And just right for your poem.

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      Victor W. Kwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

      Your blend of words is captivating.

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