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Succumbing to the occult

Updated on January 31, 2013

Today,succumbing to the yoke of the occult, I try to read my past in footsteps I made on the dunes . Such eerie forms – full of holes,fading lights, slanted lines,brittle almost broken if touched by a shadow I thought full of stories worth to tell as I am surrounded by a gear: pen and paper.I was mistaken to look beyond my nose and dream of carousels and a lollipop.My world is limited by barbed wire,imposed by a puppeteer and exposed to cold reality by you

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @epigramman.Thanks so much for stopping by and commented.I really appreciate it.So you were trapped,swallowed hook,line and sinker lol

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      Beautifully stated in a very artistic and poetic way - have to admit the title caught my eye but the words lead me to so much more - and I am so glad . Had the epi-man written this - he would have been talking about devil horns and Charles Manson - lol

      Thank you for your subtle and sublime writing here

      lake erie time ontario canada 10:23am and sending you warm wishes

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Yes,your wish is my command.Right now, I am working on one of them .It is a personal poem:)Thanks so much for encouraging me.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      James another WOW.. I love it.. it hits home my friend/

      Are you going to write one of your special love poems? have I missed it?

      voted up and sharing

      Debbie

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @Elena,Thanks so much for making it today here.I really missed you so much here.I hope you are doing so fine.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      The same here.Thanks so much:)

      Have wonderful weekend.

      By the way,my real name is Tijani ,means in English :My Crown:)you can call me Tija or James or Brother T hehe small kids here call me Uncle T hehe

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      I am so very proud to be your sister James.

      Enjoy your weekend.

      Eddy.

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      Elena 4 years ago from London, UK

      Interesting Poem James and beautifully written.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @Eidden.Thanks so much sister:)You are my sister from now and on.I think you don t mind calling you sister,right ??

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @Isaac White,Thanks so much for stopping by and commented.

      I appreciate that.Have a nice wonderful weekend.

      James

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Great words James;loved it and I wish you a wonderful weekend.

      Eddy.

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      TDM 4 years ago from Welcome to my beautiful world, where magic is no longer a myth.

      great job. loved your detailing.

      I. White