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Sun Bath of Realisations With You

Updated on May 26, 2012

No we won’t kiss under

the moon light

No we won’t touch our

connection with words

No we won’t be repeating

mistakes making us slip

into sorrow

No we won’t

No we aren’t

No we won’t be…

No you can’t change the

Inner weavings of me

No, I can’t wait

helplessly keeping

still with you

No we can’t forget;

but don’t fret, we

won’t keep breathing

for tomorrow

No, I won’t stop

feeling your caress

I’ll never erase a single

memory of your trace

No we won’t

No we aren’t

No we won’t be…

No, I’m no longer a slave

to your


No I’m not brave enough

to let go

No I’m not weak enough

to keep hoping

No. I won’t stand for it.

“No, it’s not lack of love…” you said

No it’s not love, trust or soul

that you played for me

No we won’t

No we aren’t

No we won’t be…


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    • UnnamedHarald profile image

      David Hunt 5 years ago from Cedar Rapids, Iowa

      Very nice, ivadragostinova. I especially liked the repeated cadence of No we won’t, No we aren’t,No we won’t be…

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      Cathy Nerujen 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Usually with this subject it is all about oh yes, oh yes, oh yes. The constant "no's" here are interesting. I enjoyed this wonderful romantic poem.

    • iva dragostinova profile image

      iva dragostinova 5 years ago from Brighton, UK

      Thanks Unnamed Harald and Astra! :)

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      Mellonyy 4 years ago

      Awesome! Voted up!

    • iva dragostinova profile image

      iva dragostinova 4 years ago from Brighton, UK

      Thank youuu! x

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