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Sunrise Sunset - Haiku

Updated on February 23, 2015
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Sunrise


New day beginning


Rising glorious colors


Forecast Promising


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Sunset


Nightfall to begin


In the wings darkness awaits


As the sun goes down

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      Raymond Bureau 4 years ago

      Never been to Dunedin, but we have resorts all over Florida's coasts.

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      Susan Zutautas 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Raymond, The second picture above was taken close to Dunedin Florida. My mother in law has a place there.

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      Raymond Bureau 4 years ago

      We have a vacation club resort in Marathon. That's where we saw the sunset. We also drove to Key West while down there. What a beautiful place! I have written about why we like our vacation club so much.

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      Susan Zutautas 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Raymond, I've been Florida many times but have yet to visit the Keys. I would love to though.

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      Raymond Bureau 4 years ago

      I had heard that the Florida Keys had the most beautiful sunsets. In 2012, my wife and I got to see it there, and we agree!

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      Susan Zutautas 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Thank you teaches.

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      There are some glorious colors in these photos. Very lovely poem, wish I could sit and view the sunset/sunrise everyday.

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Thank you Sophia.

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      Sophia 5 years ago

      just have to say were they haiku? PLUS i loved it

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Lady_E, Thank you, glad you liked it.

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      Elena 5 years ago from London, UK

      Short and Sweet - I love it.

      I love watching the sunrise and sunset too. :)

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Thanks Linda. They are fun to do.

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      Linda Rogers 5 years ago from Minnesota

      Great haiku Susan. I love writing these as their short but say so much with so little. I also love the photos.

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Sky, I enjoy writing haiku's and love the responses I get from them such as yours. Thank you so much.

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Beautiful Susan! I will love to have a Haiku teacher. The simple way in which those like you, that are, none short of professional at writing them.

      The effects it has on others , it's just amazing!

      It's beautiful, and touching , thief a smile off your face regardless of what you are thinking.

      I guess the description that fits the most , is a prelude to beautiful Haiku.

      Bless.

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Vincent, Thank you so much dear friend.

      Sue, Thank you. Today I wishing I was at the beach in Florida.

      raciniwa, Thank you.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      love the contrasting times of the day...the pictures are awesome as well...

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Hi Susan,

      These are wonderful. Love the pictures. So calm & serene.

      Have a good evening.

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      Vincent Moore 5 years ago

      I am going to have to start calling you the Haiku Queen. Yes indeed you are getting better with each published Haiku. Loved the photos to match the mood. Great job my talented friend. Voted Up, awesome and beautiful like you.

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Ruby and tlpogue, Thank you both and yes I am so ready to feel that warm sun too. A few more months to go :)

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      Tammy 5 years ago from USA

      I love the photos! What a beautiful poem to read on such a cold blustery day. Thanks! I am ready to go sun bathing.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful description of the sunrise and sunset, perfect pictures..Loved it Susan..

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Cardisa, Thank you.

      MM, I would be honored for you to link this haiku to your sunrise/sunset hubs. Thank you so much!

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Absolutely fabulous Haiku's Susan, I'd like to link this to my sunrise/sunset hubs if that's ok.

      Voting up, best wishes Lesley

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      Carolee Samuda 5 years ago from Jamaica

      Haaaa! Such beauty in your your words as in the photos.

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Tammy

      Audrey

      Hmrjmr

      Capadium

      drbrj

      cat on a soapbox

      Thanks everyone. drbj, I was actually going to add a video with the song Sunrise Sunset. Maybe I still will.

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      Catherine Tally 5 years ago from Los Angeles

      nice imagery, lovely haiku!

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      drbj and sherry 5 years ago from south Florida

      Sunrise, Sunset. These lyrics would make a great song. Oh, wait, it is a great song. And a great haiku, Susan.

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      Beautiful!

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      Hmrjmr1 5 years ago from Georgia, USA

      Love it!

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Beautiful Susan!

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      Tammy 5 years ago from North Carolina

      Gorgeous! I love these beautiful nature poems and photos on a bleak January day. There is nothing better. I hope you will write more original poetry. Awesome!

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Ruchira

      Deborah

      Rebecca

      barbergirl

      Frank

      RH

      Thank you everyone for reading and for all the awesome comments!

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      Kelly Umphenour 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      Now you've done it - a perfect Haiku for day or night:) lol

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      Sunset sunrise both perfect :)

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      Stacy Harris 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca

      Very beautiful!

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      Rebecca Mealey 5 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

      Pretty Haikus and love the pictures!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      so awesome so beautiful... you are so good at this..

      bravo Susan.. always love your poems..

      i voted way up

      debbie

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      Ruchira 5 years ago from United States

      wow...awesome!

      beautiful message being conveyed in simple words.

      voted way way up with awesome!

      You are rocking it, susan :)