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Sunset In The Desert

Updated on October 5, 2014
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My First Attempt At Writing Poetry ~ I Couldn't Find A Better Topic For My First Poem Than A Gorgeous Desert Sunset


S pectacular colors and

U nderestimated beauty

N ever the same

S cene twice ~

E thereal ribbons seemingly

T raveling along the wings of angels


I nteresting shades of orange, purple and pink

N early reaching to heaven


T ransforming splendid

H ues eternally, optimistically

E verlastingly hopeful


D elivering a promise through

E nchanting darkness and

S ilvery shining stars

E nveloped in a blanket of sweet tranquility

R eturning brightly crimson, a sunrise...

T ouching our hearts with the everlasting promise of a brand new beginning ~
A brand new day~


Nevada Sunsets Can Be Stunning

Sunsets here in Nevada, especially near the mountains, are absolutely breathtaking at times. We've been here for several years now and we are always amazed at the golden, orange, pink and purple hues we see here in the Nevada mountain and desert sunsets. They are something to behold. These sunsets were the inspiration behind this, my first attempt at poetry.

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      KathyH 5 years ago from Las Vegas, Nevada

      Thank you, rlaha! I appreciate the feedback! :)

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      rlaha 5 years ago from Spartanburg, SC

      Nice one!

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      KathyH 5 years ago from Las Vegas, Nevada

      Thank you too, acaetnna! :)

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      KathyH 5 years ago from Las Vegas, Nevada

      Is that what this poem is called? Acrostic? Interesting!! Thank you so much! :) I appreciate the great feedback! :)

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Beautiful.

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      Poetic Fool 5 years ago

      Acrostic poems such as these can make for entertaining reads and can challenge your command of the language to come up with the best words. You've succeeded admirably on both counts here. The images painted by your words and the pictures themselves were beautiful!

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      KathyH 5 years ago from Las Vegas, Nevada

      Thank you lundmusik! :)

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      lundmusik 5 years ago from Tucson AZ

      very very beautiful!!! words and pictures --- voted up

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      KathyH 5 years ago from Las Vegas, Nevada

      Thank you september girl and dankendk! :) It feels a little strange putting something out that you're just a beginner at doing! :) I appreciate it!

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      dankendk 5 years ago

      stunning!

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      september girl 5 years ago

      I like how you started each line with a highlighted letter. Nice poem, very good and well done for a beginner. :)