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Surprise! - haiku

Updated on October 8, 2012
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This is for two of my good friends, each expecting a little bundle of joy later this year. First for one, second for the other.


Surprise!


Candlelight dinner.

Warm night. Stars are in her eyes.

Baby on the way!


And they keep on coming ...

Both friends now have darling children. And I have family with babies on the way. So I thought I would add a few more little poems....

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Mommy’s tummy searched.

Looking for tiny heartbeat.

Oh, Dear! There are two!


Chatter of child’s play.

Best friends sharing toys. Silence.

Crayon covered wall!


Dad’s up early. Kids

are in the kitchen making

mom’s breakfast in bed.


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      Dana Strang 5 years ago from Ohio

      AudreyHowitt - thank you.... :)

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Lovely!!

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      Dana Strang 5 years ago from Ohio

      Sueswan. Yes. My friends liked it very much. And I am glad u did too! Thank u vote the vote :)

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      Dana Strang 5 years ago from Ohio

      Laurinzo - thank you. It is such a beautiful thing when a new life is created and nurtured. I am honored that I was able to portray it in my tiny little poem.

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      Dana Strang 5 years ago from Ohio

      Hello Debbie. Yes. These babies recently graced the work with their presence after what felt like a wait of forever! Mommies and babies are all doing well.... take care :)

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      Dana Strang 5 years ago from Ohio

      Jools99 - I am sure my friends would agree with u 100% :)

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Hi Dana,

      Love it! I am sure your friends did too. A wonderful tribute and haiku.

      Voted up and away

      Take care :)

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      Live To Write 5 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      Hey Dana... wonderful tribute, what a beautiful subject for haiku.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Oh How delightful and is this the babies that just joined the world ? awesome and wonderful

      blessings

      Debbie

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      Jools99 5 years ago from North-East UK

      Dana, this haiku perfectly described happiness in 17 syllables, lovely :o)

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      Dana Strang 6 years ago from Ohio

      ChristyWrites - Thank you! it was a great gift for me too when one of my friends told me how much she appreciated it. :)

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      Christy Birmingham 6 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      How beautiful! What a nice gift of words for your friends as well.

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      Dana Strang 6 years ago from Ohio

      rajan jolly - thank you. my friends both enjoyed it too, so I guess that makes it a success :)

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 6 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      This is so touching. Wonderful.

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      Dana Strang 6 years ago from Ohio

      Faith - I am just as blessed as they are. I spent the afternoon with one of them and her 1 year old daughter. I am helping her unclutter the house to make room fo the new baby on the way.

      Hyphenbird - That is a sweet idea. I have thought about writing a poem for each of them when their baby is born.

      Bill - Thanks for sticking around to read my little diddy. Funny how I delayed your computer shut down today. I was late meeting my friend because I was posting this haiku. I told her she had to forgive me because I was late beacuse I was writing her poem :)

      Bob - Thanks. These little suckers are addicitng! I like that they force me to say a lot in a few words.

      suzettenaples - Glad you liked it. I was looking for photos to compliment the poem and had one of those "aha" moments when I saw those.

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      Suzette Walker 6 years ago from Taos, NM

      I like this haiku - well done! The photos are precious!

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      diogenes 6 years ago from UK and Mexico

      Very nice thought, Dana...haiku is ideal for conveying this type of message and emotion.

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      Bill Holland 6 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I was just going to shut down the computer and I saw your name pop up. The picture of the baby is precious! Any haiku is better than any attempt at a haiku by this boy. Have a great Sunday my friend!

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      Brenda Barnes 6 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

      Ah, how sweet. Discovering that precious life is growing inside one is an awesome moment. Your friends will treasure this forever. It would be cool to paint it on the nursery wall!

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      Faith Reaper 6 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, how precious is this, DanaTeresa!!! Your friends are blessed to have you as their friend. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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