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Surviving your Love

Updated on February 27, 2014
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Anan is an online blogger and private consultant since 2009 in the areas of relationships and interfaith spirituality.

Seduced by the music of a memory

ensnared in the magic of your voice

where my heart dances and falls again.

Only to raise with the sound of falling rain.


Heavy notes in the already condensed air

marching towards the broken window

the one where we said our goodbyes

and since then, hasn't see any light.


Cold irony of a million sun downs

where the sun never sets again.

As the night follows my tomorrows

saying goodbye, saying it in vain.


Celeste

© 2012 Anan Celeste

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      Robbie 2 years ago

      I don't know who you wrote this for but you helped a brteohr out.

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      Holly 3 years ago from Lone Star State

      People see love as sunshine and rainbows, unless of course you have ever been broken by it- then you know how hard it can truly be to love someone and lose yourself to it. Your sadness is beautiful within your words.

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      Anan Celeste 4 years ago from California

      Thank you Made!

      Blessings.

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      Madeleine Salin 4 years ago from Finland

      Sad and beautiful. I really like the way you write.

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      Anan Celeste 4 years ago from California

      Thank you Mrs. Brooks. Blessings...

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Anan I never.. read this one its beautiful how wonderful .. how you have depicted my feelings so well. just awesome.

      many blessings to you

      sharing everywhere even on Google

      Debbie

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      aap138 5 years ago

      You captured my current feelings perfectly. Excellent poem.

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      Carolee Samuda 5 years ago from Jamaica

      This is such a heart felt lovely poem. I have been there too. It reminds me of a past broken heart....oh how it hurt.

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      guruu01 5 years ago from Vadodara, Gujarat

      excellent poem

      Seduced by the music of a memory

      heart dances and falls again

      sound of falling rain.

      marching towards the broken window

      Cold irony of a million sun downs

      As the night follows my tomorrows

      i just flow deep in u r memories with falling rain.

      great words.

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      Anan Celeste 5 years ago from California

      Thanks Cleaner3 !

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      you are an artist with words, my sweet. "The music of memories" flows throgh my own mind. for the music is always in our hearts.

      very nice.

      Michael

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      Anan Celeste 5 years ago from California

      Thank you xtatic! This is the product of 3 am inspiration! When the heart speaks, words always get in the way , don't they?

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      Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Very nice, sad poem. "Cold irony of a million sundowns".

      Such beautiful imagery. I hope I will be able to write something this good for my poetry group on Tuesday night!

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