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Sweet Friendship ~haiku~

Updated on April 17, 2013

A haiku about true friendship.


Two friends holding hands

Silent prayers on their lips

Friendship never ends


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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      Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Now that is a Haiku poem. Outstanding and beautiful work M. Voted up, beautiful, and awesome :) These are fun to write huh?

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      M,

      Congrats on your haiku! Awesome flow and use of words. Excellent job M!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hey James..hehe thanks a lot!! I dont know if it's right or maybe too cheesy.hehe At least I've written one!

      Hi J. that;s my first try of haiku..thanks for the comment..i hope it's not that bad. hehe

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      M,

      Yea, I thought it was your first try! No, it was not cheesy and it was right on, abiding by all the rules. Excellent! Kudos to you M!

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      My Minds Eye53 4 years ago from Tennessee

      Thumbs up - far better than my first try.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      J, hehe thank you so much!! I knew I could always count on you!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      My Minds Eye53, thank you so much! :)

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      Jonathan McCloskey 4 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

      I enjoy the Haiku, and this one has become a new favorite. So much power can be packed inside such a small form of poetry.

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      Earl 4 years ago

      Lovely picture... just by looking you can imagine lots of magic.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Beautiful...... Friendship is a deep bond between people! Awesome....

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      True friendship never ends, beautifully expressed.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Jon, thank you so much for the beautiful comment.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Earl. Thanks for stopping by and for the read.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Lathing! Thank you much for the message!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Nithya.thank you for appreciating!

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      snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      Friendship is a beautiful thing.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks snow :)

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      True friendship never ends...unconditional love....and you are beautiful!

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      Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Awesome Job!! Great expression of true friendship!!!

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Beautiful, hopeful, innocent and full of love. Great job, Spy!

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      Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      Very nice Haiku; friendship is always a treasured thing.

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      So wonderful Haiku poem . Voted up and beautiful.

      Where or how did you get the the swag flowers I love it, Joyce.

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Hi M. short, sweet and to the point= Awesome !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Oh, so true!

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      unknown spy....your Haiku's are awesome...." friends never having to say words "...

      pisture says it all....nice job...

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      Larry Wall 4 years ago

      Very Good:

      You seem to be mastering all forms of poetry. Keep up the good work.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hello Spy, loved your haiku. Friendship is wonderful and should never end..

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      Mary Hyatt 4 years ago from Florida

      Hey, I admire you for trying to write Haiku. I couldn't do it! It was sweet, I thought.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Billy, Patty, Brave, Genna, Joyce, Kashmir, Deb, KJforce, Larry Wall, Ruby, Mary,

      Big big thanks to all of you my friends. Thank you for reading and for all the wonderful messages.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. True friendships are to be treasured.

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      Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

      Beautiful haiku, friendship is so precious...

      Voting up

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Unknown, simply beautiful, well done. Voting up all the way

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Gypsy..Lesley, and Jo.

      Big thanks to you all for appreciating my haiku (first try..)

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Wonderful haiku Spy! Smile inducing as well.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much Beckie!

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      Richard Ricky Hale 4 years ago from West Virginia

      Awesome job Unknown spy!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you friend!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      lovely Haiku....voted up and all:-)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much Deergha!

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      Mary 4 years ago from Cronulla NSW

      Short but sweet:) lot's of votes...cheers

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      So sweet and it does speak of all the necessary things needed in friendship.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Carter, teaches..oh you're sweet. thank you my friends.

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      A.E. Williams 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

      Too sweet unknown! Loved it! :)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Aubrey! thank you for reading!

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