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Sweet Hesitance

Updated on December 3, 2014

Sweetheart

Precious Heart
Precious Heart | Source

Red Hot Sweet

Eye Candy
Eye Candy | Source

Departing

with the heart

that drags the water floor like an anchor

I can’t see an encore not even a promise

continuously searching blade by blade for a place to rest my letters

just when I think I can click my heels began spiraling

a spiral into trickery supposing to have a few minutes

wrapping one of the inherent ropes around my wrist for handcuffs

line the words hard in a row commence to slaying by prose

one by one the spectators fall like pins to recover and delight again

the adulation is mutual as I become thrilled starting to depend on the short lived submission

as I do the same not for remorse as I think they are brilliant in composing

but the slow withdrawals threaten and the disappearing act begins to peak


I know the odor of the stages

I sense between the expressions of the play


once again confronted with a decision realizing the foundation

starts to recede... enter the season and it’s time for me to fade


exit my iron clad heart

Sweetest Pain

Sweet Fannette Doll

Sweet Fannette
Sweet Fannette | Source

Sweet Nothings

Sweet Nothings
Sweet Nothings | Source
Lover's
Lover's | Source

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    • Abluesfornina profile imageAUTHOR

      S Marie 

      2 years ago

      Sorry for the delayed response J. I do so appreciate your writing as well, which I will soon be visiting upon. Thank you.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 

      3 years ago from Reno NV

      You have been some incredible lines of poetry that fit together to create a masterpiece. Thank you for a memorable read and I hope that all is well. Jamie

    • Abluesfornina profile imageAUTHOR

      S Marie 

      3 years ago

      :) Thank you Christinemariezzz for reading this piece.

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      christinemariezzz 

      3 years ago

      "...I can't see an encore, or even a promise..."

      Splendid span of emotion packed in nine words.

    • Abluesfornina profile imageAUTHOR

      S Marie 

      3 years ago

      Well thank you so much Chris. I really like your interpretation,very similar to the gist of this poem.

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      CrisSp 

      3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Poignant! No matter how your readers would like to interpret this exquisite piece, it is for me a resounding longing for something or someone that was once there, like that of feeling temporarily fulfilled only to be consumed by confusion in the end.

      Excellent write!

    • Abluesfornina profile imageAUTHOR

      S Marie 

      3 years ago

      Thank you so much Frank :)

    • Abluesfornina profile imageAUTHOR

      S Marie 

      3 years ago

      Thank you so much Frank :)

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      Frank Atanacio 

      3 years ago from Shelton

      wow, I like the raw, stillness of this poem

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