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Swelled Egotism

Updated on July 3, 2012


Lost in your own admiration

Appreciation of none but self

Flaccid is your intellect

Its mete is worn with dread



Steps you take haughty and steep

Jeers and sneers, cruel but meek

Your rash smiles question your dexterity

Useless boasting, no credibility



Using fear to subdue

You stomp on fellow hearts

Dillusioned in your anserine self

Killing potential, you’re scarred



But boisterousness you always fall to

And coldly leave its path

Painful it might be for you

Lest you are feared to face its wrath


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      donabhatt 5 years ago from Hyderabad

      Too good......It looks like lyrics of some song with some melody of its own and of course , every words are so true!!

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      jellygator 5 years ago from USA

      Nice!

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      QudsiaP1 5 years ago

      Savour but a touch of what you possessed;

      Your chances are dim,

      You can't stand upon those suppressed,

      Amidst treacherous seas you choose to swim,

      Fear what you have become,

      Were you ever humble?

      Eaten alive by your chosen egotism,

      All will watch your eventual crumble.

      Beautifully done Rahul; sadly the world is filled with those who underestimate the ability of others and believe themselves to be God. Still I guess we should be thankful to them; had they not existed neither would this expression of emotion.

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      shalini sharan 5 years ago from Delhi

      this indeed is the scenario prevalent in every nook and corner

      i am amazed by the way you covered it

      shared

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      IntegrityYes 5 years ago

      He did well.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Great idea for a poem Rahul! How often do we become egotistical, too many times to count. Great reminder Rahul, thanks!

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      Jonathan McCloskey 5 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

      This poem is brilliant in the way that it captures that side of people that can't help but love their reflection. Great job, rahul0324.

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      The eternal struggle of ego vs. humility. You did well here birthday boy! very well indeed and as always it is a joy to read your work.

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      Maria Jordan 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Ever

      Greedy

      Ogres

      Amazingly on point pictures to accompany your elegant expressions...

      Voted UP & ABI...hope you are enjoying your birthday! Hugs, Maria

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      Cynthia Sageleaf 5 years ago from Western NC

      Alas, it's all too easy for people to get arrogant if they perceive the person in front of them is somehow lesser. Poignant and well-told - this is a really neat poem. Voted up.

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      that's why I used to serve coffee. good job. thanks

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      Tammy 5 years ago from North Carolina

      A very wise caveat for all of us. Scary pictures! Sharing!

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      Angela Brummer 5 years ago from Lincoln, Nebraska

      I love this! You are so good! Shared of course! My feel this as I read it and it draws images into my mind: Using fear to subdue

      You stomp on fellow hearts

      Dillusioned in your anserine self

      Killing potential, you’re scarred

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      So very deep message this poem got . Pictures are really perfect !

      Dost again you rock ! Voted and shared !

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      I appreciate your poem and the expressive picture that effectively convey the meaning of your poem.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      a poem with strong substance.....very good work...voted up and all

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      myownlife 5 years ago from london

      Amazing poem as usual, voted up

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      Ashish Joshi 5 years ago from India

      Man, the way you juggle with words! Amazing...

      'Up', 'Awesome' shared...

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      M K Paul 5 years ago from India

      I am fan of you poetry..Voted up...If you hv free time, visit my profile too

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Rahul...i am not use you writing like this...wow is all i can say...it is amazing...you my dear are a true poet..huggs ....debbie

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Rahul, each part of the poem is mind-blowing on it's own. Thoughtful, deep, insightful and captivating!

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      Rahul I would comment but my ego is too big ..LOL great share my friend

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      Zulma Burgos-Dudgeon 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Very insightful, Rahul. I've met many people like this over the years.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. I do believe if it could be put into a song good ole' Alice Cooper could do it justice by shouting out the emphasized words. Well done. Hugs to you from Riga.

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      Terrye Toombs 5 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

      Very nicely done, Rahul, you captured the essence remarkably well! VUM.

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      DAWNEMARS 5 years ago from The Edge of a Forest in Europe

      This is awesome work. Was like a ghost from the past returning to haunt me! Indeed the ego can be scary. Funny too. Votes across.

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Hi Rahul,

      Using fear to subdue

      "You stomp on fellow hearts

      Dillusioned in your anserine self

      Killing potential, you’re scarred

      Insecure cowards I say.

      Voted up and awesome.

      Take care :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Very good. The ego is so difficult to keep under control. Enjoyed..Thank you..Cheers

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      Mary Craig 5 years ago from New York

      "Jeers and sneers, cruel but meek" the true description of an Egotist! I have to agree with would make a great song..I'm thinking head banger genre to really belt it out!

      Loved this as always. Voted up and awesome.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      A fine write in honor of those chest-puffing buffoons!

      I enjoyed the chuckle it brought as well.

      Love your work my friend.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you Dona... much appreciated

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks Jelly

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Beautiful words of wisdom and truth.... your beautiful comment made my simple work more worth

      The sad state of the world is indeed something to ponder upon and improve for the betterment of the entire humankind

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you so much Shalini!

      your kindness is well received

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you Integrity!!

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks Josh! I am glad you liked it :)

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you my friend Jon... I am humbled by your kind comment and thank you for the words of wisdom

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you so much Sir Bill! Thanks again for the warm wishes...

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Wonderful description Maria! Thank you so much... I am glad you liked it

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hi cclit! You are correct... your words of wisdom only add to my simple work!! Thank you

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      haha! Staying to your roots Martin... that is the key.. indeed!!

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you so much Tammy!

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you so much Angel! I am glad you liked it :)

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hi Flash! Thank you for such kind feedback! I am glad you connected

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you so much my friend Dghbrh...

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you for the kindness everytime myownlife

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you so much Ashish! I am glad you liked it and m humbled by your kind feedback

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hi MK... I am surely going to do so... dnt wrry... I am sorry If I have not connected with you yet :)

      Thank you for connecting to my work!!

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Deb! I am amazed by the degree of kindness you usher me with everytime...

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Max... you kindness humbles me to the core.. Thank you for the everlasting support and kind feedback

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      hahaha... nice one Frank... thanks for stopping by... LOL

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Oh Ashley! They are everywhere.. I tell ya... every nook and corner...

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Oh... If Alice Cooper could honor me... a mere man like me... You have given me a new dream Rasma..

      Thank you so much.. :))

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hi Terrye! Thank you so much!!

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you so much Dawn!! I am sorry if I disturbed you

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Insecure Cowards... brilliant description Sue!!

      Thank you

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you Always! I am glad you liked it!!

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Head banger... I believe too... thank you for such kind comments and honors.. I am so humbled.. thank you Mary!!

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Ah.. chest puffing buffoons... LOVELY... I am at ease now Beck!!

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      DAWNEMARS 5 years ago from The Edge of a Forest in Europe

      Disturbed I can manage by myself. Very entertaining and clever.

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      This is so cool poetry here Rahul, I'm sure many people who are all self absorbed have issues such as this. Great delivery and smooth tantalizing poetic flow as well, and awesome imagery. Bravo!

      Voted up and out.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you so much Mike.. I am glad you like it!

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      Ishwaryaa Dhandapani 5 years ago from Chennai, India

      A wonderfully versed poem on one of the most prevalent human characteristics! You managed to capture the vastness of this human aspect into a thought-provoking and vigorous poem! Well-done, Rahul!

      Thanks for SHARING. Interesting. Voted up

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      PurvisBobbi44 5 years ago from Florida

      Welcome to the "World of Humans" we are all so different--yet we are alike in many ways--each wearing a mask or naked face.

      I love your work and I cannot wait for more of your poems of deep thoughts.

      Your Hub Friend,

      Bobbi Purvis

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      A.E. Williams 5 years ago from Hampton, GA

      Ooh... you have a way with words my friend!! :) Very awesome poem.

      -Aubrey

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hi Ishwaryaa! I am glad you liked my work!

      I am humbled by your feedback

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Indeed Purvis ... indeed! We wear a mask ... we all hide behind it.. but the truth comes out in one or the other way :)

      Thank you for connecting :)

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thanks Dear Aubrey... I am glad you liked it :)

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      D.Juris Stetser 5 years ago from South Dakota

      Lord, now you've got me trying to remember everything I've said or written to everyone in the last good grief how long's?!!!

      A wonderfully presented reminder Rahul, (frighteningly so!) Voting up, interesting, awesome, useful...wow! Thank you my friend..well done!

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      hahah Juris... you of all do not need to fear regarding such tendencies... a few are as tender as you.. :)

      Thank you for such kind feedback :)

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      Linda Bilyeu 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

      Well said Rahul. Overinflated egos are a no-no.

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      PurvisBobbi44 4 years ago from Florida

      Hi Rahul,

      I can relate to your poem as I have worked people whose egos caused a negative environment. But they did not last long. You did a great job on this one.

      I voted amazing.

      Your Hub Friend,

      Bobbi Purvis

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      You're batting 1,000 my brother! Love the into picture!

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hi Linda... very apt words you said here..

      Thank you for the visit

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hi Purvis... such people never last long really.... they succumb to their own egos one fine day

      Thank you for the support and visit :)

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      hahaha,,,, your a superstar sister Shauna... love u loads

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Love ya, too, Rahul! I noticed a typo in my first response. Shame on me! I meant "intro", not "into"!

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      No worrie... i understand the sentiment sister.... :D

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Hello Angela!

      Thank you for such kind feedback... i am glad you liked my work

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      raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      so deep and sublime my friend...you touch me on this one...

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Thank you so much Raci..

      Your continued and kind support humbles me :)

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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      Nice Rahul :) I like this :)

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      thanks so much rdsparrow

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