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Take My Hand : A Poem

Updated on July 5, 2017

White little House at the Bay

Little swing from rubber tyre painted white,

decorate by flower

Big wood garden table,

full of food

You and me holding hands

Smiling to each others


Will is this happen?

In my dreams I ask

When family and friend gathers by love

With you and me as the central


In my heart,

I can sense the tears

I know it's about to come

In the day when I grasping your hands

And say goodbye to all


My life here full with dreams

But so far away and sad

When my life with you which about to start

I know will give me many probation before it right


But I still choose to be with you

Because it is better to live this life

And taste the pain together

Than spoiler in dreams only.


So please, don't hesitate

Just take my hands

And bring it away

with all of me

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    :D Thank you.

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    ladyonthemirror 7 years ago from Indonesia

    lovely,sista...

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thanks Karen And Poetlorraine. :) I put that pic because I don't have perfect fit with the one in my thought.

    "White little House at the Bay

    Little swing from rubber tyre painted white,

    decorate by flower"

    Hard to be find anywhere! :lol:

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    poetlorraine 7 years ago

    snow makes me feel cold but your words warm me up thanks

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    Karen Russell 7 years ago

    THAT WAS REALLY ROMANTIC, TWO THUMBS UP, THANKS...

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Your welcome. :)

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    Thanks again Freya Cesare. I loved the words and the pictures. the pics made me colder though. I'll look at this again in summer!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Waalaikum sallam, Uthman. I'm in usual mood. You know. :) Thank for your nice attention. You are such a great brother for me. Thanks.

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    Uthman 7 years ago

    Assalam alaikum sis', how have u been? Just drop-by to say hello and commend ur efforts, keep it off and may Allah reward u. Wassalam alaykum.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    You're welcome, and thanks. It is nothing than your 'the girl in the avatar' which I enjoyed so much. :)

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    dohn121 7 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

    Wow. I really enjoyed this. I also enjoyed the photos that accompanied it. Thanks so much for sharing!