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Take This Heart out : A Poem

Updated on July 5, 2017


Take this heart out

I don't need it!

This pain getting out of the line

I even do not know why it come

And why I should carrying it all around

So please, would you take this heart out?

THOUSAND PIECES OF TEARS

Tears flowing

To the river of dreams

Heart shattering

Thousand pieces spreading

Cloud hanging

Storm threatening

Words banging

Head flooding

Collapsing everything

It is my heart

It is my being

It is me

Now, will only be


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  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you for read this and leave comment, htood. I really appreciate it. ^_^

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    htodd 

    6 years ago from United States

    Thanks for the nice post and nice poem

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Aaaah, you are so sweet. Thank you, mottiandbander. ^^

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    mottiandbander 

    7 years ago from Chd

    awesome dear,

    It touch my heavy heart.

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, Micky, nice to see you around and thank you for the compliment. :)

    You keep reminding me of someone who have the same name. Hmmm... He love to write a song, have sweet voice and have very beautiful face. I wonder, will someone asking question if I write it like this in here? LOL

    By the way, I really like your poems.

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    Micky Dee 

    8 years ago

    Freya I always love your writing. And this is so beautiful. Thank you!

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    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, Donh, nice to see you here.

    Well, to be honest, Donh, I am not as creative as I need to these days. :( So many poems that I made is so suck and make me feel shame even just to look at it. I want to yell out, "Hei, Muse, get your ass back here right the way!" (pardon my language, please. )but it is will only to make him runaway faster, so I shut myself in silence. I need some insight, please!!! :(

    Thank you, Dohn for your compliment and your kindness to me.

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    dohn121 

    8 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

    You pour so much passion into your work, Freya. How do you continuously do it?! Great poem.

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Wahfaker, Thank you very much. ^_^

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    FAKHAR 

    8 years ago from ISLAMABAD

    beautiful dear really attractive

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ah, thank you, Moulik. I'm so glad I heard that. ^_^ I hope that poetical feeling will trigger several poet for us to enjoy so HubPages will be rich with so many poems in variety of theme. Thank you, Moulik.

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    Moulik Mistry 

    8 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

    This attracted my poetical feelings, well done...

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Carolina, thank you. ^_^ I'm so happy you visited me again. Yes, it is good now. Just flash of emotion. Thank you.

    TimelsFlying, yes alhamdullilah. Insha Allah I will gain the best result. ^_^ Thanks.

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    TimeIsFlying 

    8 years ago

    So painful (in this world only)... Alhamdulillah the results are always awaiting in Heaven... Thanx

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    carolina muscle 

    8 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

    Freya: The 'thousand tears' poem is lovely !!!!

    I hope you're feeling better!

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Yes, Alhamdullilah. ^_~

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    TruthSeaker 

    8 years ago

    Hamd lilah :)

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Yes, emotions are much greater than words. Words being used to capturing, defining and describing the form of emotion, but million world still never enough, because we are complex creatures. But still, when emotion being describe, it flowed away with words and make the emotion become more better.

    I am feeling so much better, alhamdullilah. Thank you, Bro. ^_^

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    TruthSeaker 

    8 years ago

    Very intresting

    Writing is one of the best ways in expresing emotions

    However, I believe that emotions are much greater than words..

    Hope you feel better Inshallah

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Too short! That is why I added another poem.

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    You are too kind, Carolina. Thanks. ^_^

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    carolina muscle 

    8 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

    I understand the pain here... Nice work!

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    ouch! Hehehe... yes it is. Thank you.

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    Michael Shane 

    8 years ago from Gadsden, Alabama

    Wow! A beautiful picture!

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