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The Best Part of You : A Poem

Updated on July 6, 2017

What I see in you,

The best part of you?

What makes me like you,

Still you want to know?


You are weird! Well, me too!

Make us even in so many ways



You read my craps, even when it really sucks.

And laughed to my jokes, no matter how it sounds.



You understand my riddle, even I never explained

When other rolled their eyes and think I’m crazy



You love to tease me in so many ways,

Gave me laugh as your gifts in my days



You just like me, another me.

Make me wondering how far we will keep finding our similarities.



You giving me inspiration to fill my empty days.

Become the reason, for me to wake every day.



You know what compassionate heart means, and living through it

Wishing for the same dreams, which I’m really grateful to knowing



You asked me become your company, knowing I need that

Hold by loneliness, to finally found each other

Or maybe it is just because you are so cute with that beard

And making my tummy fluttered every time I look at you?



To be Honest, Dear,

The best part of you that I like so much

Because it is you, and not anybody else

But you


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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Say hi for your someone from me. ^_^

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    Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

    A quick stop.. Wanted to share this so I could make someones day..

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    LOL. I'm happy able sharing the precious words with you, Capedium. But the words will be empty, without the heart in it, so, say when you mean it and you will bring your lady to heaven. Thank you for your comment. It put smile in my face.

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    Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

    This is love..love.. love..lovelyyyyyy

    I have nothing to say put a hearty smile

    This poem took my breath away..

    Showed me how beautiful love could be

    With each word piercing through my heart

    Word for word, going forth and back

    Is like a perfect story that should never end.

    Love like this is divine

    The day I find, MY LIFE IS COMPLETE..

    Freya, this one of my favorite..

    Hope you wouldn't mind

    Day by day, I will snick to steal a line or too

    Lines I will whisper in my lovers ear..

    I believe she will let me steal a kiss or two when am done.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, timntim9. :) Welcome to my hub.

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    tlmntim9 7 years ago

    Very nice, touching

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, CP. Welcome to my Hub. The party here never stop, Sir. So come anytime! I will really happy to meet you.

    Thank you, Sir. I am really happy you like this. These are my favorite collection of pictures. Beautiful Pictures.

    Thank you for visiting me. :)

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    Christopher Price 7 years ago from Vermont, USA

    Though it seems I came late to your party, I must tell you how much I liked this poem. Very sweet, like a tender touch or a warm hug.

    The photos are just the perfect accompaniment.

    CP

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Kenneth: Hahaha....

    Evnpenmanship : Thank you. ^_^ I'm glad you like it.

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    evnpenmanship 7 years ago from Thompson, Manitoba

    Awesome.. love this..

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    kenneth godin 7 years ago from canada

    you can be my co pilot:)

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Moulik. And that really best compliment for me. \^o^/ Thank you.

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    Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

    This is so lovely and one of the best poems I read to-day - well done, very well done...

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you.

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    kenneth godin 7 years ago from canada

    I liked this poem!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ow! Thank you, Micky. That is so sweet of you. ^_^. Thank you.

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    Freya- this is so pretty, just like you. You know how to love. You have such a great heart! Peace

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    How about both? \^o^/ hehehe... Thank you, Carolina.

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    carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

    This is lovely.. I dunno which I like better, the words or the choice of pics!!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ah, sallam, Prasetio. Nice to see you. ^_^ Thank you. That is so sweet of you.

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    prasetio30 7 years ago from malang-indonesia

    It touching my heart. I know this poem is represent your pure heart. I am glad to find it more.....

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hmmm... all breath have been taken away? You need ambulance? Hahahaha... I'm glad you like it, Polar Bear. ^_^

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Maita. me too! I have those pictures for so long already, waiting to perfect time to display those, and I guess, this poem, even talking about relationship between man and woman, it also talking about relationship in general, so I think maybe they can fit together. I'm glad you like it.

    Thank you, Maita, for you nice comment, and thank you to visiting me.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Iounn, Thank you. I'm really glad you like it. I write about what I feel and it is real feeling. Thank you. ^_^

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    prettydarkhorse 7 years ago from US

    I like the images, lovely, poem is sweet as well, Maita

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    Iðunn 7 years ago

    This is a wonderful, upbeat vision on love and intimacy. I'm so glad I got a chance to read it. You have a flair with detail because it's obvious you write about what is real and that comes through. :)

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    Mr. Story Teller 7 years ago from United stated

    This is very very sweet. WOW!!!!! Is all I can say, this poem was so beautiful, all my breath and words have been taken away.