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THE HERO. Simple Rhyme

Updated on June 13, 2017
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Paula has freelanced for nearly 40 years. She has a passion for her forte of Behavioral Science & continuing education in this field.

There's something on my mind today

Something that I need to say

As nothing helps me understand

So I reach out to hold your hand

The emptiness I'm left with now

We lost each other, tell me how?

I hoped we'd walk a peaceful road

With strength to bear the heavy load

Of those who said we'd never be

The ones we knew who couldn't see,

That you were made to be my dream

And lean on me so it would seem....

Your Hero I must surely be.


The weeks and months and years passed by

With every heartbeat I knew why

We shared it all, the good the bad

Never straying. Never sad.

We knew no one would help us out

Despite the pleas we'd often shout.

Our walk was lonely cold and long

It mattered not though right or wrong

What happened to the hope we had?

Were we to see our love turn bad?

I thought I was your Hero.



The ups and downs were everyday

On bended knee I begged you, stay

Your eyes were sad and filled with tears

replacing laughter through the years

What happened Babe? Who broke your heart?

Can I help? Where can I start?

I want to be your Hero



We struggled on, though little spark

Was all of it a simple lark?

It pains me when I see you smile

With others as I grieve the while.

For everything I give to you

And all the things I try to do

Is someone else your Hero?



I feel a cloud descending now

The darkness falls, I wonder how

You've taken different steps than I

As though you soar throughout the sky

My solitude engulfs me dear

Because I do not feel you near

It's true, it's clear...I break in two

Your Hero is no one but you.




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    Paula 5 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Hmmmm...I'm now thinking it's probably a special gift to mankind in general that the vast majority don't THINK like we do!!!! LOL

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    shanmarie 5 months ago

    By the way, speaking of songs and your poem. . ..made me think of this one: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YOPOD-oU1Dg. It's not quite the same version I first heard, I don't think, but I guess this is the finished product.

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    shanmarie 5 months ago

    Actually, I read it that way at first. It seems that it is typically a man who wants to be a woman's knight in shining armor, so to speak. But then again, it can and does go both ways. . .a woman wants to be a savior-type figure to a man lost until he found her. So I can see how it can be interpreted both ways from different people.

    That said, I know you. . .and knowing you, it prompted me to interpret it maybe differently than I would have. I know how you like to solve problems and I could easily see this as something either being inspired by something in your past or a loose recounting of something from your past. Except that I wouldn't picture you with the desperation and loss of connection sensed in reading this (at least not interpreted in the way you said as someone realizing the person is their own her0, because that is not a bad thing).

    By the way, the reason I like that a reader can interpret poetry so vastly different is that it reminds me of the way music does that. Some songs are straight forward and obviously have a particular meaning. Others mean different things to different people that may or may not be what the writer(s) were thinking about when it was composed. That said, there have been a few that I've posted here that sort of shocked me the way people interpreted them. One of them I thought about explaining where it came from personally, but it was so vastly different than the way people were interpreting it that I don't think I ever explained what was going on inside my own head at the time. It's kind of funny now. Maybe later, I'll email it to you and divulge my secret. ;)

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    Paula 5 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Oops....further (Better) clarification: In this Poem, the speaker is a man....questioning his female lover.....whom, he ultimately comes to see, is her own Hero..........There, that's clear.

    BUT! Like I've said....the reader gets to determine their own interpretation! :)

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    Paula 5 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Shannon, Funny you should mention analysis of my Poem. While I've taken a chance with poetry a few times, I can say, "I don't write poetry because in my mind, it's actually not "my thing." My muse moves me now & then to try my pen at a poem. It seems to happen when I have something to express and believe that Poetry may be the best way to do this.

    If I am to understand that any message found in a poem is at the whim or discretion of each individual reader, yet the Poet, so to speak, has his or her own original intention to their message.....well then, there's no wonder why a group of students are inspired to discuss an author's work ad infinitum.....This for me, is the most fascinating aspect of Poetry, in general.

    As I read the comments, it's undeniable how vastly unique interpretations can be.

    So then I wonder, do Poets leave this freedom of interpretation to their readers and be content with it? Or, should an author divulge the true meaning touched upon by their muse?

    Did I mislead my readers or is the deeper truth that my muse is speaking to me? (A spooky concept, when I take the time to analyze)

    Paula did not intend that she is this Hero, nor did she believe this even involved her authentic life. As I penned these words, the Hero is a man speaking to his female lover.........Not, as so many have interpreted, the other way around.

    So you see, how strange that once I expose this information, this body of work, takes on a curiously different inspiration altogether~~~~even for the author....:)

    You "like that about poetry"......I haven't decided whether I do or not. Peace, Paula

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    shanmarie 5 months ago

    I thought you said you don't write poetry? This tells me otherwise. It's very moving, Paula. And thought-provoking because I can see a few different ways to interpret it. I like that about poetry. . .when it doesn't necessarily fit one mold. Especially your last stanza. To me, being your own hero can be a good thing but that's in contrast to the rest if the poem. So maybe this person you.speak of is self centered or worse.

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    Paula 5 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Perspy.....So nice to see you! I appreciate your visit and thank you for such a nice comment! Peace, Paula

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    Demas W Jasper 5 months ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

    Nice segmenting and recounting of what would appear to be a real experience you sadly shared with someone. Nicely done, Paula.

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    Paula 5 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    F.A......I do believe there are some times when we need to take the reins and be our own best friend to make improvements in our lives. This might mean we need to rescue ourselves from troubles. when there's no one else to lean on! Thanks so much for stopping by!....Have a great weekend. :)

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    FlourishAnyway 5 months ago from USA

    It's sad when love breaks apart or slowly errodes. We can always be our own hero when others fail us.

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    Paula 6 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Glad you enjoyed "The Hero," Happy Knees....Thanks for your input. Stop by anytime. Paula

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    Miss Intern 6 months ago

    That was impressive. Big thumbs up for you Mrs. Paula :) I love this.

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    Paula 6 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Heads UP! fellow writers. Did you know that March is National Poetry Month?

    Read a poem or 2.....better yet, write one!....I'd love to read your Poetry!

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    Paula 13 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Au fait......That's an awfully nice thing to say. It actually does make sense to me, because I haven't the confidence I'd like to when it comes to poetry. When I read poetry by the authentic & famous Poets, it reconfirms my lack of confidence......seriously.

    I honestly don't know what even spurs me to write a poem. My muse is as independent as I am, I suppose! LOL

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    C E Clark 13 months ago from North Texas

    Stopping to share this amazing poem again. I think you do not fully appreciate what a fantastic writer you are! Hope all is well with you . . .

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    Paula 15 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Siddharth.....Your comment is so lovely and has lifted my spirits. Thank you so much. Have a wonderful week-end. Peace, Paula

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    Siddharth Kapoor 15 months ago

    Hi Paula........I feel your love spreading in my inner core. You have touched me with anomalous musical sounds this afternoon. Beautiful poetry just like you. Good to see you.

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    Paula 17 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Graham....So nice to see you. Thank you very much my friend for appreciating my work. You lift my spirits.

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    Graham Lee 17 months ago from Lancashire. England.

    Hi Paula. I found your poem moving. Tip top.

    Graham.

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    Paula 17 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Jackie Truth is, I've only dabbled in poetry a few times. I've not ever really studied it to know all the different styles, what they're called or how to put it all down in writing.

    I certainly can appreciate great poetry & would rather enjoy poems written by others than get into writing it myself.

    Thanks for checking it out though....always good to have a visitor!

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    Jackie Lynnley 17 months ago from The Beautiful South

    I did not know you did poetry, Paula, and very well! I am truly impressed and this also is my favorite poetry form.

    Hope you have more and if not, get busy!

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    Paula 20 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Hi Shyron.....

    Remember we cane be our own Hero! :)

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    Shyron E Shenko 20 months ago from Texas

    Back to share this beautiful piece again. I really love this and I especially love the picture of the eye in the clouds crying into the lake.

    Blessings my friend

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    Paula 24 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Vellur.....I see you embraced my message with ease. Thank you.

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    Paula 24 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Perspy........I like the way you think! LOL

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    Nithya Venkat 24 months ago from Dubai

    Sad but beautifully written. We can always be strong on our own, the true hero is within us.

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    Demas W Jasper 24 months ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

    Good one for selling to a greeting card company for a "lost love" card to smack the other person between the..........somethings.

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    Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    swilliams....So nice to see your beautiful smile tonight. Thank you for the lovely comment on my work. Our writing is only as amazing as our readers. Have a great week-end filled with happiness.

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    Emunah La Paz 2 years ago from Arizona

    Amazing work Paula! I love Mariah! Your Hub opened up with a beautiful melody and from there your words flowed with compassion and understanding. You are an amazing artist! I loved it voted up and tweeted out!

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    Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Congratulations to YOU too, Linda Sue! I've always known you're a winner!

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    Linda Bilyeu 2 years ago from Orlando, FL

    Congratulations for your 2015 Hubbie Award for Best Commenter!! Ain't that the truth!! No one shares a comment as well as Effer!! :)

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    Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Thanks Missy! Always good to see you. Keep being your own Hero!

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    Missy Smith 2 years ago from Florida

    I love your poem Paula. I really like reading this type of poetry. I think I identify with the heartfelt ones more, the ones that show more emotion. This one was very engaging for me to read. :)

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    Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Thank you so much, Vellur.....I appreciate your visit.

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    Nithya Venkat 2 years ago from Dubai

    Beautiful poem, lovely!!

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    Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

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    Shyron &

    Phyllis......

    So good to see all 3 of you! Thanks so much for appreciating my attempt at Poetry. You're too kind. Shyron, thanks for sharing it.

    I think women can really relate to knowing we need to be our own hero..........Peace, Paula

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    Phyllis Doyle Burns 2 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

    Hey Paula - I love good poems that bring a tear or two. It leads us down a path of fading love the at the end there seems to be a sign of hope for understanding and renewal. Well done, Paula.

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    Shyron E Shenko 2 years ago from Texas

    Paula, this is awesome. I absolutely agree with billybuc and Au fait.

    Will they ever get back together? That is what I thought would happen.

    Simply Beautiful.

    thumb-up UABI and shared

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    CrisSp 2 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

    "You've taken different steps than I

    As though you soar throughout the sky

    My solitude engulfs me dear

    Because I do not feel you near" ~

    Only a writer who writes from the heart can pen something fervent like this piece and you are the hero of all those who can connect with the feeling.

    Voted up, beautiful and shared.

    P.S. Enjoyed Mariah's song...."and the hero lies in you"

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    Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Au fait.....Thank you SO much. Sincerely, the responses have blown me away. I nearly did not publish this. I convinced myself it just didn't measure up. Then I realized that we need to leave the objective opinions to our readers.

    You're too sweet. I appreciate the boost.

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    C E Clark 2 years ago from North Texas

    You are such a talented writer and in different genres! Billybuc nailed it. This is really excellent. Now write a novel with this at the end! You are truly gifted Paula. Voted up and ABI.

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    Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Suzanne....We must be our own Hero in order to be willing and able to rescue others. Thank you for your visit and thoughtful comment.....Never "wait" for someone to bring you flowers. Plant your own garden.......Peace, Paula

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    Suzanne Day 2 years ago from Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

    This is a beautiful poem and one that I resonate with. You ARE always your own best hero though I kept thinking the poem was about a partner until the end.....you kept me guessing! Voted interesting.

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    Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Oh My.....I couldn't special order a more meaningful comment than a compliment from YOU! You have made my day. Thank you so much. Yes, you must visit more often. You are missed!

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    Poetic Fool 2 years ago

    Paula, I haven't been around HubPages much for some time now but hubs like this remind me of what I'm missing. This is truly poignant and beautiful and written from a place deep inside you. I'll have to make a point of visiting HP more often and especially your corner. Take care, my friend!

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    Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Awww Ed...thanks for the pep talk. I seem to only dabble in poetry and don't have a deep knowledge of it and all the various forms. Once in awhile I just tap out some feelings and leave it at that. I figure someone out there will think it's OK....

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    ahorseback 2 years ago

    As saddlerider said first , not everyone has to like it [poetry ] , but even the love- hate relationship of poet to his paper is sacred . We struggle with our own mortality in words , in the rhymes of life , I know that much of my writing is feeble at best , self absorbing at the worst , but write I will ! As long as we like it my friend , we can do no harm ! Awesome words you have written , why ? Because I experienced your pain !......That's the beauty ! Keep on keepin on !.......Ed

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    Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    awwww Frank....Is it not enough you are talented and handsome? Must you be sweet too? "Lucky" the lady in your life! smile.

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    Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

    I reread it again it it still.... stills me.. wow amazing my friend the last stanza really held me down

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    Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Thanks Ruby, although I freely admit that Poetry is not something I do often and I know my simplicity does not compare to all of you really great poets here in Hubville.

    Every once in a while I get an urge to rhyme words......Good to see you!

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    Ruby Jean Fuller 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

    This is rhyming poetry and it's beautiful. You take the reader through the good-bad- and ugly. I can relate. Loved it...

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    Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Peggy.....What a wonderful comment. Thank you so much!

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    Peggy Woods 2 years ago from Houston, Texas

    That is a very powerfully written poem expressing the heights of happiness and steadfastness and the ultimate despair when the relationship took a turn for the worse. It evokes all kinds of emotions and that is the sign of a good poet in my estimation.

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    Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Vincent.....You have just elevated me above the clouds!!!

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    saddlerider1 2 years ago

    Oh and did I forget to say, your my HERO;-)

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    saddlerider1 2 years ago

    Life is poetry, every single one of us has it in us to let out, express on our own terms, some may think it silly, many will feel the pain, joy, anger or sadness, if we choose the right words and for some rhyme, then the palette will explode with color. This piece I felt, I saw, I heard and was touched by it, simply said, this is Poetry of life. Brilliantly versed, I felt yours and his pain, you reached me, therefore it's poetry to the soul. Hugs

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    Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

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    Hearing from 2 lovely ladies is a nice week-end gift! Thank you. I feel "good" inside too.....Wishing health & Happiness girls! Peace, EfferJ

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    Linda Bilyeu 2 years ago from Orlando, FL

    Happy Weekend. Effer J :)

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    Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

    Very cool to see you writing poetry! This made me feel all good inside!!

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    Paula 2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Jo...so good to see you and read your wonderful, thoughtful comment....Thank you so much. Enjoy your week-end...hope it's filled with" Good Words "& Good Works!! :)

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    Jo_Goldsmith11 2 years ago

    So very true. We must allow ourselves to be our own hero. And it is nice when we can find someone who sets examples like our fire fighters and military men and women, to help show us what true heroes are!

    Shared, up for awesome, useful , beautiful and so worth reading!

    Blessings! :-)

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Audrey....Thank you so much. Coming from you, I am especially honored. Yes, Guilty as charged. A true Romantic.....:)

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    Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

    This is so lovely! We poets are all romantics!!! Do more, do more!!

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Thanks Lady...Nice of you to visit and comment. Always good to see you. :)

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    Elena 3 years ago from London, UK

    A poem Written from the heart - I enjoyed reading it and the photos are perfect too. Thanks.

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    I'm pleased my simple rhyme has gone over so well.......must be we have an awful lot of ROMANTICS here at HP!! But then, what writer is not a Romantic??

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    Beth Perry 3 years ago from Tennesee

    What a beautiful and emotion-filled poem!

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    Writer Fox 3 years ago from the wadi near the little river

    How nice to find a fellow poet here – a kindred spirit!

    I love this line: "What happened to the hope we had?" And the way you ended this is beautiful. Voted up and I'm sharing your photo on Pinterest, on my Poetry Page and Love and Marriage Page.

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Yes, they do, Michelle.....and I suppose this is reason enough to be our own best Hero..........Smile.

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    Michelle Liew 3 years ago from Singapore

    Wonderful feelings, Paula. We so want to connect with our heroes. They come and go, don't they!

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Thank you, Nithya. Your comment means a lot to me.

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    Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

    Beautifully expressed! Loved it.

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Oh my! I hardly know what to say.....but THANK you! Actually, I'm not at all a Poet.....I just like a change of pace every now and then. We do have some incredible MASTERS of Poetry here at HP, though......you will find them and you will know them when you do!.......Thanks again.

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    Janis 3 years ago from California

    This is so powerful and meaningful. What a wonderful use of words. You are very talented!

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    Linda Bilyeu 3 years ago from Orlando, FL

    Haha! You might cry, but might not. That doesn't help much, does it? The song is written for daughters. The funny thing is Brad has two sons. It's a nice song, I didn't cry. I also enjoy writing lines for country songs, ok, actually just saying them. :)

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    No.....but I'll make sure I do...you say, "Awww"....that doesn't mean the damned song is gonna make me cry, does it? Maybe I should hold off listening to it. I'm in one of those inexplicable weepy kinda; "I-don't-know-what-the-hell-is-wrong-but-this-sure-ain't-me"----moods.

    BTW...that's a line in a country song I wrote.......OK, it's not, but it could be!

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    Linda Bilyeu 3 years ago from Orlando, FL

    Have you heard our buddy Brad Paisleys new song...Shattered Glass? Awww! :)

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Right back at ya Girlfriend!

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    Linda Bilyeu 3 years ago from Orlando, FL

    Hi Effer, Enjoy your Labor Day weekend. Relax a bit, you deserve it! :)

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

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    Gentlemen of HP. I am honored that you came to visit and leave your thoughts behind. I am pleased that you enjoyed The Hero . Thank you.

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    Sanjay Sharma 3 years ago from Mandi (HP) India

    You are right, Your Hero is no one but you, and all other things are just shadow chasing. Well said.

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    prasetio30 3 years ago from malang-indonesia

    Beautiful and I like it. Thanks for sharing!

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    Oyewole Folarin 3 years ago from Lagos

    Where there is love, there is life. Thanks for sharing this interesting content. Voted up!

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    lhoxie.....I thank you ever so much. I'm pleased that The Hero touched your heart.

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    Linda Hoxie 3 years ago from Idaho

    This so so beautiful and heart wrenching.

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Awwwww shucks, Frank.....I love you too. :)

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    Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

    i love the message.. the rhyme, the poet up and amazing :)

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    Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

    Beautiful and with great expressions.

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    OK...I'm in! A-Haunting we will go...." Hope you're resting and healing and having someone else do the weeding for now! Somehow I just know you are looking out your window, fretting over your gorgeous gardens.....itching to get out there.

    FORGET IT!! Keep your butt where it's supposed to be until you are completely better. (I suppose considering the pain you went thru....I needn't remind you!)

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    Mary Craig 3 years ago from New York

    I will haunt you all the days of our lives GF ;)

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    You look really familiar......like someone I knew in a previous life.....a very long time ago...

    Dare I ask where the H*** Miss Mary has been? Never mind. It doesn't matter. It's very good to see you! Thanks for letting me know you're still around and still my beautiful friend, Tillie.............

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    Mary Craig 3 years ago from New York

    It may be a questionable relationship GF but I have to say you're certainly mastering the art of poetry! You go girl.

    Each line led me to want to read the next and it goes without saying your final line rings true for all.

    Voted up, awesome, and interesting.

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    LMAO!!! TRUE!!

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    Linda Bilyeu 3 years ago from Orlando, FL

    I could totally relate...all work and no play make Effer and Sunshine...nah, forget it, we could never be dull ;)

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    I'd love to go to Nashville. Truth is...right about now, I'd be happy going anywhere....just to get away from the rat race around here.......work work work...no rest f0r the wicked.

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    Linda Bilyeu 3 years ago from Orlando, FL

    During lunch on Friday I told Dave and Billy Bob that we should plan a road trip to Nashville, you could come along with us! One day. When we actually plan it :)

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Looks like a trip to Nashville is in order!

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    Linda Bilyeu 3 years ago from Orlando, FL

    The only hotline I have is Twitter. Unfortunately a few thousand other people also have his Twitter hotline # and they keep hogging up the line. Shameless.

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    Paula 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Dianna......Thank you so much.....I'm glad you enjoyed my Hero Tale.

    Linda Sue...If you've got a hot-line to Brad.......Call him up! We'll be rish!

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    Linda Bilyeu 3 years ago from Orlando, FL

    What an awesome surprise to find when I was thinking about you and stopped by to say hello! I seriously think this simple rhyme would make a great country song. I nominate Brad Paisley to sing the vocals! :))