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The Land of Hubpages : The Crownless King and Wizard of the Dark Mountain

Updated on July 8, 2017


Long ago in the land of Hub Pages

I meet the king who’s really loves cycling

He just got the throne after their last King, Wayne Brown

Lost his head, and also his crown


“Now new King is here,” Queen mother, Joy56 said

“Everything will be okay then.” The Advisor, epigramman agree

“But we still not able to find the crown.” King Nephew, prasetio30 reminded

“Without the Crown no King will ever be.”


So there you go, the search for the crown started

While the King sat there and just waited

Admiral Mentalist acer become a leader

He brought all soldier, warrioRR and the King most favorite Alien Hunter, the Great, saddlerider1


“Why we need Alien hunter for, hey Guardian of Story Teller?” the King asked

saddlerider1 said there are so many aliens out there.” I answered

“Maybe it is them who hid that crown.”

But the sweet noorenaz shake her head.

“I think it is still on the head of Wayne Brown.”


Anyway, everyone go, but me

Since they already bring Mr. Story Teller with them, they didn’t need me

Oh, I don’t mind at all, really

I have Oliver and oliversmum visiting me here


Leave alone with the beautiful witch, Nell Rose

The King sat there and waiting

When finally from his throne the King arose

Couldn’t able to sit there, he felt irritating

“Hey, akirchner, give me three bottles of margarita!”

Said the King

“Don’t forget with those all yummy food you made!”

He asked akirchner to bring

“Aye, my King, please forgive me.” akirchner said in hurry

“But ralwus already steal all liquors that we save for thee.”

Now the King being angry

Wonder why ralwus put him in misery

“Bring him to me!” The King commanded

And Nell, turn him become walrus for me!”

“I am so sorry, King, but it will never be.” sord87 said.

We couldn’t able to find ralwus anywhere around here.”


“They said the wizard of the Dark Mountain kidnapped him.” Eiddwen said.

“I heard he kidnapped himself!” rasenstars1 didn’t agree.

“But why he should kidnap himself?” Asked the King

“Because of love, My King! And what else it could be?” prettydarkhorse sang happily

“I thought he already have Russian wife?” Asked the King again

“That one died when he accidently stabbed her with a pin.” G Miah explained

“So he after Dark Mountain Wizard now?”

“Enchanted, my King, maybe is the right word.” Sufidreamer corrected it.


“So who is this Dark Mountain Wizard?” The King asked

From everywhere, so many answers suddenly being sound

“She is the oracle of the time”

“She live in past, present and future”

“She never wears any shoes!”


“Is she beautiful?” There, the King wants to know

And again, the answers came from every corner

“Exquisite they said.”

“We never know.”

“Only her voice”

“Her wisdom.”

“Her eccentric way of thought we ever heard.”

“Hey, people! You make me really want to see her!”

“Truly sorry, but you can’t, King.” There, he already back; my dear, Mr. Story Teller

“There are the deaths from Nell Rose Hub haunting the mountain.” Said warrioRR

“We believe in their hands ralwus's head had landed by now.” Added saddlerider1

“And maybe Wayne Brown’s too?”

“Therefore then the crown too.”

“So right now, ralwus already gone too?”

“It can be possibility!”

“But only as deep as curiosity!”

“I don’t care! Now, send carolina muscle there!

Let him kill the ghost with his dance

Ballet, carolina muscle!

That is what you can do the best!”

So the search is began again

To look for the crown and the Wizard of the dark mountain

Everyone trotted to the higher ground

And the King once again should be left alone

To be continued...


Can anyone see who the King is?

Can anyone guess who the wizard is?

This poem is too long I must stop for while.

Or the whole story will become too wide

Do anybody have any idea how to continue this story?

Please help me. @_@


The Reference

For you who feeling little lost in following this story, you can click on the link in every names also my sources bellow :

RALWUS DREAMS By Wayne Brown

CHARLIE'S WOMAN By Wayne Brown

Madness of the Night: An Alien Encounter By Saddlerider1

The Four Horsemen: A Ghost Story For Halloween. By Nell Rose

Halloween Blessed Be Witches And Warlocks, Come In And Sit... By Nell Rose

Dance this mess around By Carolina Muscle

Don't Try A Track Stand On Three Margaritas By Micky Dee

Spinnin' Motion By Sa'ge Carbalis

Exqusite, You say By Sa'ge Carbalis


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    Debra Allen 6 years ago from West By God

    No ideas right now, but I did vote it up and funny.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, Lady Guinevere. Thank you very much, dear. ^_^

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    sord87 6 years ago

    Never realized the cyclist king would have so many soldiers to search for the crown!I think you should add in witches and wizard too to make it exciting!Some magic will make the story superb just like the journey of Harry Porter!Who knows you are the next bestselling writer after J.K.Rowling!(smile)

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hahaha... Good idea, Sord. And who knows, what you said came true. I don't mind become the next JK. Rowling! LOL

    Thank you for reading, Sord. :)

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    saddlerider1 6 years ago

    Thank you for including me in your story, I am the Alien hunter:0) searching for the King's crown should not pose to much difficulty as long as we have some idea where he was last with his crown on his head. Maybe you should introduce the Wizard to the Witch and together they make their magic together to help us find his crown. I look forward to reading more of the treasure find. Lovely start to a fine story.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Of course you are the Alien Hunter, Sir. You are the one who created that spooky Alien story. Hiiii... only great Alien Hunter who able to live and told the story. Hehehe...

    Well, they couldn't able to found the cowboy's head, so the crown disappeared with it. ^_*

    I am trying to get along with all story everyone ever made and their characters which showed in the avatars and through comments they ever wrote. It caused the story became too wide, so I stop for refreshing everything for while. Gave me dizzy, really! @_@ but I enjoying making it.

    Introduce the wizard to the witch? Ok, let see how it will bring everything together. :)

    Thank you, Sir.

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    Oh my some of this is before my time, do I have some catch up to do here. Freya your muse has been double time i see, hehe.. such a wonderful fairytale you start to weave here. delightful :D hugs :D

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, Sa'ge. Did you hear me calling you in every words? :D

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    oh yes and i have surprise for you I will send you , someone doing the chicken strut hehe hugs

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ah, Can't help and wait \^o^/. I love surprise!

    I want to see the Chicken Strut! :(

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    in your email hehe

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    I do love love you! Oh my. Sa'ge was right! You lifted me up. It is so nice to see people playing together! I love to see God's children playing in a magical place. I love these people so much. God bless Freya!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Sa'ge : I will check, asap!

    Micky : Anything for you, dear King. :D

    God bless you too, in every step of the way.

    But what shall we do, if we can't able to find the crown at all? :(

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Sage! Ah, you are my wizard! That is great gift! :D :D :D Love it! Thank you, dear.

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    There may be a mystery to solve here we must wait and see what happens, maybe some of these characters will write a hub about their place in this adventure :D and maybe it can be a grand book all together :D hugs :D

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Whaaa! That will be great! I want to see it that way! Make it happen, please! Make it happen!

    Big hugs for you too, dear Wizard!

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    agusfanani 6 years ago from Indonesia

    That's a funny story !. May the crown be stolen by one of those aliens ?.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Will you lend your name to me to become the alien's name, my friend? :P

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    chatlea orchid 6 years ago

    maybe it needs a magic words to make this story more special

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Magic words? Hmm... good idea! I will ask the witch to make one for me later. Thank you. :)

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    Tony McGregor 6 years ago from South Africa

    I really enjoyed this one! A really original idea well executed.

    Love and peace

    Tony

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, Tony. Welcome to my hub. I am so glad you like it. It is mean a lot to me to know I can entertain readers with my work. \^o^/

    Thank you. :)

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    Oh my! The Great White knight Sir TonyMac has arrived! Sir Tony is certainly a knight of truth and bravery! And he brought with him another magical fairy who is sitting there with him! I bet she is very powerful!

    Did sord bring his sword?

    Lady Guinevere came but she was just briefly puzzled. Surely she will return with Sir Galahad or someone!

    Saddlerider, the alien hunter, is always watchful of his people and will give a leg up!

    God bless your wonderful kingdom! That king may have lost his head with that crown!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Eh? So you don't want the Kingdom now? What this guardian should do if the King does not want his throne? :(

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    Nell Rose 6 years ago from England

    Hi, The witch is here! ha ha what magical word would you like? this was great, I love it, and thanks for adding me, I will go and find a magic word now! lol cheers nell

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, beautiful witch. Give me any magic words you can for any circumstance and I will fit it later. Any spell from you will be precious. :)

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    Audrey Kirchner 6 years ago from Central Oregon

    Oh that's TOO cute, Freya - I'm bringing the margaritas and the food!!! Yeah - it fits me perfectly although I'd also throw in some beer, some tea and some coffee! You did a super job!! Thanks for adding me as well - what a wonderful bright spot in our day!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, Audrey. I am so happy you like it. I really want to make something about our togetherness, here in my Hub and from the comments I got, everyone seem agree it is fun. I am so happy for that. Thank you, dear. :)

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    I am sorry to be late again, someone tried to burn down my cottage in the forest. I was making some magical potions to add to Witch Nell's remedies, the children in the village are sick and need them. I was gathering the roots I needed when i noticed some smoke and rushed home. I got there in the niche of time and put the fire out.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    AAAAH! Duh, now I am confuse. It is really or it is part of the tale? @_@

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    Freya you make me laugh. hahaha

    Hidden in the forest deep there is the cottage of the Dark Wizard. you are so fun hehehe

    my son says i better hurry to tell you it is not this house on fire hehe.

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    oh i was going to ask you how yo ufind such good picture of new king. the image is uncanny; haha

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Yes! Yes! For while I thought you are really in trouble. You got me there! LOL

    The king picture really look like our King, right? I just wrote king cartoon on google picture and several good pics came out. Google is really great friend for me. :D

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    I agree it is a good likeness hehe so funny :D

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    auther.dent 6 years ago from paradise

    The crown is lost the wizard missing

    the story plays out as stories will

    the begging the middle the end but how shall we fill the in between time

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Sa'ge: Yes. With innocent expression too. I can imagine he doing chicken strut with that costume. LOL

    Auther.dent: But we can always have the son of the wizard to take the place for while, right? How if, the alien kidnapped the wizard and the son have to take her name to cover her missing incident? And think how mad the king will be when he found that the wizard is he and not she? My head spinning! :D

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    hahaha you are so funny yes that would be a grand idea for he story hehehe or also that the son of the wizard a wizard himself now has to search for his mother and the crown

    Does the dark wizard wish to be found hehehe

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    chicken strut with that on oh golly ghee wiz. that would make me laugh so hard heheh.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Yep, me too. King Micky is the best! Hahaha

    Does the wizard wish to be found? Hmm... true. I think with her nature, she will hide herself and laugh behind her son back when he have to face the King. Auther.Dent, you will be in trouble! Hehehe

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    ralwus 6 years ago

    I am laughing so hard Freya spilling coffee and spitting. This is so original and brilliantly funny. It must be , a wonderful tale. You amaze me! I pushed every button I could for you and read it again. Of course I am with the Wizard and we have the crown, I placed it at the bottom of the Arctic. Buwhahaha Nell is a lovely witch? hmmm, never knew she was a witch. Micky is the King! But I have the crown. hugs and thanks for making my day.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Whaaa! So I am able to cheer you up? I am so happy!

    Hmm... So you are the one who steal the crown? Dangerous! Dangerous! What should we do about you then? :D :D :D

    LOL. This will be fun to write with so many idea everyone shared with me.

    Thank you Charlie. :)

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    Don't listen to Ralwus! He probably has that crown in that bottle somehow!

    Perhaps this crown should be worn by each member of our ROYAL family. Freya should be wearing it now as she has taken the leadership role here and we know her to be a princess! Perhaps the Queen of Hawaii could wear it as she emerges. There are many who should wear that crown. It is too heavy and makes the "present chosen king" too vulnerable. Our leader should "float amongst us", from one loyal servant of the Hubkingdom to another (Hubington, Writeworld, Museland). But it seems the "Wizard of the Purple Lizard" has it in his grasp! Oh- the purple lizard! Is there nothing we can do? The Purple Lizard now occupies the Ralwus! Beware!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Micky, interesting idea. hehehe... So you chose to become crownless King forever? Hmmm... Duh, from walrus to the purple lizard? Rawlus indeed have so many face, didn't he? Hehehe... Interesting. interesting. Thank you, King Micky for the idea. :D

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    carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

    Hahahaha.... Freya, you really got me wanting to learn how to dance. maybe not.

    I am pretty good with a sword, though. LOL

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ah, I see. Ballet with sword? :D :D :D Let see where it will get me. LOL

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    no one knows the wizards son, it is a secret, so there for, the plot continues on with the wizard gone....... a new younger wizard appears...... with insite to the crown maybe? Just an idea, a twist to the story.. :D haha

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    ralwus 6 years ago

    roflmao still. Sa'ge, did you not know I am the son of Wizard too. My purple lizard says, "The King is dead, Long live the King!" I had to rehide that crown deep in a cavern under the glacier of mystery on the north of Dark Mountain, I covered it with Tequila and Limes in an old combat boot.

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    this is way to funny hehe it is developing into somethong beyond any of us haha to to funny :D well, This old wizard is staying in her hidden laboratory and watching the antics in her Skryer Stone.

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    Nell Rose 6 years ago from England

    Hi, I am still sitting in my cave with my cauldron, completely puzzled and trying to come up with a magic word! hee hee and wil somebody please tell carolina muscle to stop dancing? he is making me dizzy! I will turn him into a toad soon if he doesn't behave! sorry, got to go, I got to round up those stupid ghosts! 'hey come here, I said'.......

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Sage & Rawlus :Rawlus as the Wizard son? Duh! Sa'ge, you should tell him to remove that bottle away! LOL. And Rawlus hide the Crown because the King is that? Interesting indeed. What Rawlus part in King Wayne Brown side anyway? Any idea?

    Nell Rose : It is impossible to stop Carolina muscle from dancing, dear. He need to work out with his step and stuff. LOL. And don't turn him into a toad, Nell. The King need him. Go get those ghosts, dear! Hiiii... Your guests really frightening me. hehehe.

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    That dang Ralwus! I will drink out of that boot! I will also go to the lair of the Ralwus drink that boot and steal his toilet paper! Now- sit on that you Ralwus you! No better yet - I replace his toilet paper! Ooh! No - that would be too mean. Hemorrhoids at our age would reek too much pain.

    I know the Wizard's son! Others can follow the Wizard's crumbs to find the son.

    Nell - do not become drunk from the "Muscle's" spin and dangerous twists and turns! If he falls into that cauldron you will have spells all over the place!

    Beware, even, of Micky's chicken dance! You could knock that cauldron over or spill your tea.

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    ralwus 6 years ago

    LOL the Wizards son will fart rice and peas upon thy throne Crownless Micky if you disturb my Combat boot. (that is provided you can find my lair) We can make a deal, I'll trade you your crown for the official Title of Sir Farstalot and all the Knightly honors that go with it including all rights to all the ladies of the Kingdom. :)

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    King Micky! You make me laugh really hard and not able to stop now! GYAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

    And Rawlus, you are not different. You are too, very funny!!!!

    Oh, thank you for this laugh. Hahahaha

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    ralwus 6 years ago

    The story gets better every day doesn't it? xox I will make you my Lady In Honours, hands off. Even the King will not be allowed to harm you or kiss you.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Yes! Now I have to knitting it together. @.@ But worth to work on. Hahaha... My guardian? Charlie, in which place you should stand around the King Wayne Brown? Advisor? General? or lover? ^_*

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    Sir Farstalot - I feel as though I have ridden in your draft! May your wind never be broken in the paceline!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    LOL :D :D :D

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    Jaggedfrost 6 years ago

    Interesting way to get noticed and appreciated.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Jaggedfrost. I am glad you like it. :)

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    K.A.E Grove 6 years ago from Australia

    What a fantastic fun adventure!

    Well done! I cant wait to read more :)

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    me thinks witch Nell needs a bit of help on that magic word, you need one pretty fast if you be moving along with this journy'e end. hahaha

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    prasetio30 6 years ago from malang-indonesia

    I am honored with this hub. You put my name in your beautiful story. I also proud of you, how you can make beautiful story like this. I must learn from you. But like your question in your message, I'm not pretty good to make a poem. You are still the best, Freya. I saw your imagination in the land of kingdom, where the king as the king. But somehow, I still curious with the next story. Good work, my friend. VOTE and VOTE again. God bless you!

    Prasetio

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    nighthag : Ah, thank you. I still writing it. Wish me luck! :D

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Sa'ge: Well, for while, before Nell ready with the magic words, she have to bear Carolina Muscle's dance because it is the only weapon we have. LOL.

    Dance! Dance! Dance Carolina! Nell need your dance to inspire her. Hehehe. Please, don't turn me into toad, Nell!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you for the nice comment, Pras. I still working with the sequel. But flu got me the other day and I couldn't work at all :(. I'm fine now, just sore throat left. Insha Allah, it will not take too much time to write the new one.

    You should try to write a poem in English, my friend. It is fun.

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    Oh no! Did the spells from one of the characters cast the flu demon into you? Or did you kiss the wrong "toad"? Never kiss the Ralwus! You might turn into a frog!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hehehe... no, dear King. It is not Rawlus, but the ghosts who kissed me. They managed to hid themselves from Carolina Muscle eyes and Nell's potion and touched me with their chilled lips. Hiiiii....

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    I hope that potion helped to heal you, we need our guardian counsel. :(

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    Imust be of to the banquet hall now, my chef has prpared the meal and is served. catch you on the flip.......

    ;D hugs :D

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Yes, the potion work very well, dear WIzard.

    So, you go to banquet and didn't invite me? T.T

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    You notice when the men take over the conversation - we can't help but revert to the preteen years?

    It must be another spell! By all means don't drink of the bottle that ralwus carries! When the ralwus drinks it -he will take your thoughts and recycle them through the potion that runs his head. The thoughts will come out of the ralwus that only the Sa'ge can cipher. The rest of us will become mesmerized and unable to speak!

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    ralwus 6 years ago

    Hahaha roflmao

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ah, Rawlus. It seem King Micky already became your victim in so many times, because it is him, besides Wayne, who wrote you a poem. How many potion you gave him, Charlie? Lol

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    warrioRR 6 years ago from Rawalpindi Pakistan

    Sorry I am late here

    I like my character as well as the hub thumbs upP for you

    nice work Freya

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, warrioRR. What took you so long? I am about to publish the second part now! LOL

    Glad you like it. :)

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    Leni Sands 6 years ago from UK

    Absolutely loved this - kept me laughing all the way to the end...

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ah, I am glad you like it. Thank you. \^o^/

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    NEHRA 6 years ago from MAURITUS

    Hey Sis love it.!!!!! (^_^)

    And Love you too..!!!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Noorenaz: Salam, beautiful one. Love you too, dear. You know I do. :)

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    Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

    I'm afraid my attendence to this story is late due to an hospital stay,but as your gallant solder,along with the might of carolina,I'm sure we'll end up without a head also,lol,this is whimsical delight Freya;)

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ah, so you was not in good condition? But I hope everything is alright for you now, Sir. Late is better than missed everything. :)

    LOL. Let see, will everyone have heads in the end. Thank you, Metalist Acer. :)

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    Gous Ahmed 6 years ago from Muslim Nation

    Hi Freya! This is such an original story involving Hubbits, Wizards and Witches, i feel guilty not to have read it or found it beforehand! Now i have found it and read with excitement to the end wanting it to continue, i am fascinated by your imagination and hard work you put in!

    Maybe the crown has gone to it's rightful owner, Princess Freya, and she is organising her flower kingdom down to the last flower to Go and greet the crownless King and give him a crown made out of flowers? I'm sure he'll understand and be a proud king who is the first ever to wear a crown made out of flowers. The aliens are excused and everyone in Hubbit land live cheeckily ever after!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, G Miah, yes you are late but it's ok! It in not done yet anyway.

    Interesting idea. Hmmm... But me as princess? Hahaha! Faaaar from it. I should only become the story teller, brother, and not the heroine. LOL

    Thank you for participated. Have a nice day!

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    buraq 6 years ago from Vaniyambadi

    WOah Freya, i dint ever imagine you coul;d write such a piece of Fantasy. Very appreciative. lol.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Salam, Brother. It is fun and that is why I like it. I'm glad you like it. :) Thank you, Brother. :)

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    buraq 6 years ago from Vaniyambadi

    As its a big task around there to find the crown swiftly, I'm sure the king would need something swift, stealth and strong, so here is a Pegasus for any service you need :)

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ah, Pegasus! wow! It will be great help! LOL. Thank you, brother. :)

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    Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas

    You did an amazing amount of good work on this Freya...sorry I have missed it up until now. These things normally do not slip by me. Thanks for including me in your effort! WB

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