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The Land of Hubpages II : The Kingdom Precious Gem

Updated on July 8, 2017

Here is come the sequel!

I never thought it will be like this. I was planning to end this series in 2 Hubs only, but thanks to all of you, also the mood I feel around HubPages, the story growing bigger. Now, this time it is little far from funny. I’ll try to put laugh next time but please bear this one for now.

By the way, the pictures not go with the poem but I enjoyed these pictures a lot and want to share with you all, that is why I added them here. Observing from these pictures I think I understand why the King want to give away his crown. Too heavy!

Please enjoy, my dear friends.

Freya


PS: For Reader who missed the part I, here is the link:

THE LAND OF HUBPAGES : THE CROWNLESS KING AND WIZARD OF THE DARK MOUNTAIN



Between Human's Life and Precious Gem

Which do you think more deserve to fight for?

See results

One whole week, their gone

For one whole week

The King sat and waiting there in silent every day, I let him alone

Nothing I can do so I made myself not speak

And then the troop finally came home

They bring several people to entering the Kingdom

Three Wizards, two Witches and one pot of big rose which bloom

From their look, they surely not came only in random

“You all come home so fast.”

The King looks surprised

“We didn’t reach the peak, Sire

We meet them in the middle"

“Introduce yourself!” The King commanded

One of them took stepped forward in front of everyone and said

“I am Mystique1957 and these are students of mine

Morson, dohn121, Uriel and ahorseback, also beautiful Rose to refreshing your mind”

“Do you know why I called you here?”

“You are looking for your crown. Yes, I know, Sire.”

“So do you know where it is?”

“Under your bed, sire. There where the cowboy left everything that belong to his.”

ladyonthemirrorcame out and brought the Crown

“He is right! It is under the bed all along!”

The King face came into a frown

“Why nobody couldn’t able to find it there all along?”

“Laziness they said, King.”

“Overanalyzed!”

“People love to complicated things.”

“Or too easy to make an assumption.”

“They do not have passion for searching”

“Only smart on preaching.”

“I will surely give punishment to all who missed

The precious Crown that King needed.”

“It is because cleaning service employees Sire.” SilentReed gave the explanation

“For few months after the old King passed away, they boycott the work times to do demonstration

Demanding the nobles to never forgetting

About lifting the toilet seat when they do their things.”

I rolled my eyes but the King started to laugh

“Oh may! People, you are what you said indeed!

Go on now! Amuse me!

Tell me how you created your story!”

“But the crown is fake, Sire.” nifty@50, the King advisor said

“Fake?”

Sure that word make everyone head

Turning around to check

“See this?” msorensson pointed on top of the crown

On everyone forehead then, carved a frown

“The diamond is real.” she said

“Isn’t it supposed to be?” everyone asked

“No. It is not, because the real Diamond on the real Crown already sold

And that crown only have crystal on it's top"

“So I heard.”

The King acclaimed

“WHAT?”

“THAT IS SHAME THING TO DO!”

“THE DIAMOND BELONGS TO ENTIRE KINGDOM AND NOT FOR THAT LAST KING TO SOLD!”

“WHY SOLD KINGDOM PRECIOUS HERITAGE?”

Opening the Kingdom's book account

Neverletitgo then read it in bitter tone

“To brought food into your table

Medicine to save your elder

Clothes to cover your skin

Money to overcome the famine”

“For everyone of you who sincerely thought

Stone is more precious than human flesh and blood

KILL ME THEN!

BECAUSE I SURELY WILL DO THE SAME!”

There!

Our King had said!

But where is exactly the Crown?

And which one is thw Wizard of Black mountain?


TO BE CONTINUED.....


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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Tonymac04: Awww! You make me blushing, sir. Thank you very much. ^_^

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    Tony McGregor 6 years ago from South Africa

    Great Hub, Freya! I really enjoyed the read. You are clever to make these stories with Hubbers names. I rather envy your skill!

    Love and peace

    Tony

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Good morning, Pras. Thank you for visited me, and also for the compliment. You are great friend. :)

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    prasetio30 6 years ago from malang-indonesia

    Good evening, Ira. This is my second visit. I really appreciate your work and made this story so beautiful. Love and peace!

    Prasetio:)

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, Lady G. That is great response. I am glad you like it. :)

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    Debra Allen 6 years ago from West By God

    Freya, you write such gems.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Prasetio: Hello, Pras. Sorry for the late reply. Thank you for reading this, my friend. :)Blessing for you too.

    Noorenaz: Salam, dear. Thank you for the compliment. Love you.

    WarrioRR: I will try to put together everyone again in the next sequel, my friend. Thanks. :D

    Nell Rose: Hello, beautiful witched. I am glad you mentioned about it. I will visit you soon, dear. Thank you. :)

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    Nell Rose 6 years ago from England

    Hi, Freya, sorry I missed this! I love this second part of the story, and you made a very good point, very well done, loved it cheers nell

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    warrioRR 6 years ago from Rawalpindi Pakistan

    Well the sequel is awesome But I miss me in this.

    Nice creation Freya

    I hope you should make another sequel for this

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    NEHRA 6 years ago from MAURITUS

    Love the pictures..! had a good time reading, Sis you are very talented.!!

    kisses.

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    prasetio30 7 years ago from malang-indonesia

    Good evening, Freya. Sorry, I was late to knew this hub. Actually I wait this sequel from your last hub about The Land of Hubpages. I really enjoy all the story. About how you put your friends being part of the beautiful story. You are such a great gift. I didn't know how you can make all this things so special. I have to learn much from you. I give my rate special for you.

    Blessing and hugs,

    Prasetio

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Aris Budianto: Thank you, Aris. :)

    Akirchner: Thank you, Audrey. ^_^

    Leni sand: Hi. Welcome to my hub. Yes, more to come, if it is God's will. I wish you will keep reading it later. Thank you. :)

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    Leni Sands 7 years ago from UK

    Love the story, love the pictures - I sense there is more to come - where is the crown and who is the wizard of Dark Mountain, indeed?

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    Audrey Kirchner 7 years ago from Central Oregon

    Very well done, Freya!!

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    Aris Budianto 7 years ago from Lying along the equator Country

    Lovely story Freya and love the cartoons, thanks

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Mentalist Acer: Yes, we able to do that today, right? Put the king in sale. LOL. Tnank you, Sir.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    CP : Hello. I hope it is really magical. Sometimes my mind can really bent me from my real purpose on writing the fable at first. From Hubbers hang out, now it turned into political satire. LOL

    Thank you for reading this. :)

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Micky Dee: Aww! You always so nice to me, King Micky! Thank you, dear.

    I hope the message is clear here. :)

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Katrinasui: Hey, Girl. Glad to see you here. Thank you, dear.

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    Mentalist acer 7 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

    I say sell the king to the highest bidder,lol,beautifuly done Freya;)

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    Christopher Price 7 years ago from Vermont, USA

    What a nice little fable, more precious than jewels.

    Thanks Freya.

    CP

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    You have a brilliant mind - tweaked with the artists view - and able to bridge language and nations. I love this Freya!

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    katrinasui 7 years ago

    Nice Hub! Pictures are interesting.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Chris. :)

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    carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

    Nicely done, Freya!!!!