ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel

The Sand Kingdom: A Poem

Updated on July 7, 2017

Sun rising on not far away lands

Everyone look up, bathe under it shine

Here, clouds always hanging above

Winter covered like blanket, hard to get rid of

The queen fall on to her knees to pray

Tears flowed down, asking for a way

Cold already killed her land

She’s afraid that soon everything will be back into sand

This sand kingdom

Not standing on top of solid ground

The Palace she choose to bond

Not strong enough to bear her doom

They said it is too hard

They want her to give up

following their wish instead

To leave this land of deserted

They want her to move the country to another land

There, somewhere in the island

Where she can build her palace on top of solid ground

And free from all of her wound

Away from this so called weak and useless sand

Also from hers accused as impossible dream

They agree it might be not a promised land

But want to believe that somehow everything she have to sacrifice will be redeem

The queen fall on to her knees to pray

Tears flowed down, asking for a way

Cold already killed her land

But only God’s promised will become her command

If it is God’s will

Sand will become stone

If it is God’s will

This palace will become the only place where I have my throne!

“She already lost her mind!”

In the end,

Those are the only words they able to said


Submit a Comment
  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    wendy87 : Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

    Lady_E : It's my favorite font. Hehehe. Thank you, Lady E.

  • Lady_E profile image


    8 years ago from London, UK

    Beautiful Poem and I have never seen that Font on HP before. It's lovely. Thanks

  • profile image


    8 years ago

    beautifully written thanks for sharing...

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hey, Acaetnna. You are so kind. Thank you, dear. \^o^/

  • acaetnna profile image


    8 years ago from Guildford

    Gosh this is a beautiful poem and I love your choice of pictures too. You are very talented Freya.

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Epigramman: Hi, Mr. E! No matter what I do, I will never able to beat your skill and your speed in creating Epigram. You are the best! Thank you, Mr. E. I wish the same for you! Please say hi, from me to your cats. ^_^

    Mentalist Acer: Indeed! Hehehe... Thank you, Sir.

    Micky Dee: Ah, King Micky, you know me very well! Indeed it is my story wrapped in fantasy. I tried to playing with symbolism in my poem. Not as strong as Mentalist Acer's way of symbolism, but I hope it can be enjoyable enough. Thank you for the sweet words, dear. You always sweet to me. ^_^

    GusTheRedneck: Thank you, Gus. You are so kind to me. I'm glad you like it. :)

    Katrinasui: Hi, Katrina dear! Thank you very much. \^o^/

    SilentReed: Very true! Thank you for reading this, SilentReed. Have a beautiful for you too, dear. :)

    Chisom Emmanuel: Hi, Chisom. Thank you. I'm glad you like it. ^_^

  • chisom emmanuel profile image

    oji chisom emmanuel 

    8 years ago from NIGERIA

    i lkie you you know how to crreate imaginative poems that are beautiful. keep it up

  • SilentReed profile image


    8 years ago from Philippines

    God is the greatest.With God by our side nothing is impossible. Faith can move mountains. Have a beautiful day Freya :)

  • katrinasui profile image


    8 years ago

    Freya, It is a lovely poem. Well done buddy.

  • GusTheRedneck profile image

    Gustave Kilthau 

    8 years ago from USA

    Hello Freya - Your poem about the queen who cared for her land and her people was well done and very touching. The sand and the snow both lost and the queen won. So did Freya Cesare.

    Gus :-)))

  • Micky Dee profile image

    Micky Dee 

    8 years ago

    This is so beautiful. It's you. It speaks of dear Freya. I believe this queen could build a castle worthy of her throne - anywhere.

    This queen so fair,

    And humble in prayer,

    Asks of God, direction,

    To honor His perfection.

  • Mentalist acer profile image

    Mentalist acer 

    8 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

    One need not worry of become too familiar with a sandcastle,forever to remain intriquing.;)

  • epigramman profile image


    8 years ago

    ....what a lovely poetic story made even all the more glorious with the visual accompaniment of your wonderful pictures ......a perfect hub presentation I would say - and a genuine poetic moment which took me far far away to another time and place - where I am at once a child again but yet it still pleases and moves me as an adult.

    Bravo says the epi-man - and so nice to hear from you!

    Happy New Year and please accept my best wishes for continued health, happiness and peace!


This website uses cookies

As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.

For more information on managing or withdrawing consents and how we handle data, visit our Privacy Policy at:

Show Details
HubPages Device IDThis is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.
LoginThis is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.
Google RecaptchaThis is used to prevent bots and spam. (Privacy Policy)
AkismetThis is used to detect comment spam. (Privacy Policy)
HubPages Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide data on traffic to our website, all personally identifyable data is anonymized. (Privacy Policy)
HubPages Traffic PixelThis is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.
Amazon Web ServicesThis is a cloud services platform that we used to host our service. (Privacy Policy)
CloudflareThis is a cloud CDN service that we use to efficiently deliver files required for our service to operate such as javascript, cascading style sheets, images, and videos. (Privacy Policy)
Google Hosted LibrariesJavascript software libraries such as jQuery are loaded at endpoints on the or domains, for performance and efficiency reasons. (Privacy Policy)
Google Custom SearchThis is feature allows you to search the site. (Privacy Policy)
Google MapsSome articles have Google Maps embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
Google ChartsThis is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy)
Google AdSense Host APIThis service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
Google YouTubeSome articles have YouTube videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
VimeoSome articles have Vimeo videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
PaypalThis is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
Facebook LoginYou can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
MavenThis supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy)
Google AdSenseThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Google DoubleClickGoogle provides ad serving technology and runs an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Index ExchangeThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
SovrnThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Facebook AdsThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Amazon Unified Ad MarketplaceThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
AppNexusThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
OpenxThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Rubicon ProjectThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
TripleLiftThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Say MediaWe partner with Say Media to deliver ad campaigns on our sites. (Privacy Policy)
Remarketing PixelsWe may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.
Conversion Tracking PixelsWe may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.
Author Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy)
ComscoreComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy)
Amazon Tracking PixelSome articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy)
ClickscoThis is a data management platform studying reader behavior (Privacy Policy)