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THIS LOVE WE OWN: A POEM

Updated on May 29, 2012


A thousand sparkling rills

Could never come close to the blue of your eyes

When the phone rings, my heart thrills

Holds me in ecstatic rapture, time fliies

But then, you leave me

To dreams and reverie

Your love makes me whole

Ebbing and flowing in great tides of joy

Your laugh enthrals my soul

Destiny holds sweet sway in its ploy

But you leave me

To dreams and reverie

Our love is a golden web

That not even the Fates can break

Splendour that none can stub

For love’s own sake

But you leave me

To dreams and reverie

To show that this bond transcends distance

Time or space

Till the day we wake up from this trance

And together embrace

No, never again leave me

To dreams and reverie

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Awesome piece. Glad to see you back again.

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      Sharon Christy 4 years ago from India

      Great to be back again and reading your lovely comments! Thank you aviannovice! Great to see you again! :) have a beautiful day up ahead!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Yes it's better when we love and are together than when we love and are apart. Lovely poem.Passing this on.

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      James Kenny 4 years ago from Birmingham, England

      Simply stunning, the words, the pictures and the sense of longing. You have such a fantastic skill with words. Totally awesome. I loved it. You are such a talented writer :)

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      Erin Bower 4 years ago from Georgia

      This is lovely! I love your word choice and how it captures the feeling of true love. I voted this up and beautiful. :)

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      Mary Hyatt 4 years ago from Florida

      Beautiful words; beautiful poem. Well done.

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      Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Lovely writing and this poem had a lot of heart in it. Beautiful Work. Voted up, awesome, and beautiful :)

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Being in love is heavenly and living together the moments of love is divine

      And your poem. it is ecstatically beautiful

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Love is a wonderful emotion..Beautiful...

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      what a beautiful poem.. I am so glad I can read your work.

      wow can I relate to your poem

      blessings and sharing

      Debbie

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      Sharon Christy 4 years ago from India

      Oh Wow! Thank you so much for your kind words and support! Wishing you a good morning!

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      Sharon Christy 4 years ago from India

      Thanks a lot JKenny! Yes, love brings out the best in people, especially, when your love is with someone so much better and sweeter than yourself! Thank you for your compliments too! Good morning! :)

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      Sharon Christy 4 years ago from India

      Thank you Ebower for your votes and lovely comments!

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      Sharon Christy 4 years ago from India

      Thank you so much mary615! So glad you liked it!

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      Sharon Christy 4 years ago from India

      Thank you Olde Cashmere so much for your votes and words! Means a lot!

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      Sharon Christy 4 years ago from India

      Wow! Thank you so much Rahul! I am sure I am grateful for your constant and beautiful support! Good morning!

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      Sharon Christy 4 years ago from India

      Isn't it? Thank you always exploring! So glad for your support!

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      Sharon Christy 4 years ago from India

      So glad you can relate, thank you so much for the share! You are really a very inspiring writer and such lovely comments from you are really very pleasant and overwhelming! Thank you so much Debbie! Good morning! :)

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      Sharon Christy 4 years ago from India

      Thank you for such beautiful comments and also the share, Gypsee Rose Lee! Hope you have a great day ahead! :)

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Beautiful wonderfully descriptive poetry. Great style.

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      Sharon Christy 4 years ago from India

      Aww... thank you so much shiningirisheyes!

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ...to me you are love personifed in the written word - simply breathtaking I might add and poetry has a new princess - and it's you - lake erie time ontario canada 1:19am

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      Sharon Christy 4 years ago from India

      Oh Wow! Those are too great and beautiful words and I am not sure I deserve them, but I wish to thank you ever so much! That is so flattering and delightful! I am so very glad you liked it! Wishing you a great day up ahead, Christy! Madurai-India 2:11 p.m!

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      Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

      So very beautiful...

      Voting up/awesome

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      Sharon Christy 4 years ago from India

      Oh wow! Thank you moviemaster!

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