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Tomb of Heart : A Poem

Updated on July 5, 2017

It was green like jade at first

Hum the freshness and tranquility

Like untouchable forests, unspoiled from the hands of evil

Hug me in silence

Suddenly turned became red like fire

Burnt the soul and awaken dibble

Wrapped me in its brutal elegance

Ignored my weak and helpless struggled

Too late, it already blacken like night

Pulled me out from the warmth

Leave a trail full of holes

And painful soul

I lost ability to cry

Have no will to laugh


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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello xKimix. Thank you very much. ^^

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    xKimix 6 years ago

    Hi This is an amazing poem! Your writing is very good :)

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ouch (blush) Micky, you always so kind to me. Thank you. \^o^/

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    You are just so dang good! Thanks again.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Carolina. I hope you like it. ^_^

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    carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

    This is a very heart rending verse, Freya.

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Brutal Elegance, Like Cody with his Katana, Dohn.

    I hope it is not wrong in grammar since I asked Mr. Google for help. This poem made in Indonesian at first. Made it become little hard to converted it in English. The real tittle is "Tomb Of Soul" but I think it is not quite fit so I changed it.

    Thank you, Dohn. Your comment mean alot to me. ^_^

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    dohn121 7 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

    Great title for this, Freya. I especially liked the words "brutal elegance." Just awesome.