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Take my hand

Updated on March 9, 2014

Take my hand!

Do you really

think that by

being selfish

and obnoxious

long enough

for others to see

then go on to

believe that

its people like

you with those

types of ideas,

are the ones

who went ahead

and crucified

Jesus Christ.

I instead will

walk in his light

Go take the fight

to them go on to

beat them with his

Loving kindness

ways that they

won't even be

able to see


It was for God

so love the world

that long after

the beginning

with Adam and

his girl Eve

the temptation

to know more

create this sense

of being unsure

opening evil's door.

Take a look at

how it is with

some of us now

who are foolishly

saying,they do

not believe.

God don't exist.

Why long after

all these ages

truth you missed

we are now

coming to you

who are trying

to create doubt

Choosing disbelief

from the pains

knowing that all those

screams and shouts

the only place

they will be

heading is directly

in the arms of

Sin and anger


Like those same

Fools of which

the Bible warned .

The ones knows

in their hearts

they are saying

There is no God.

Take a look

around you

there you will

see that on

this road you

are taking while

your intentions

are to mislead

trying to take

creation seeds

as many as

you possibly can

to hell with you

everyone suffers.

Instead of love,

you are foolishly

you're preaching hate;

Instead of believe

you are in this

great hurry can't


So there you go

before the race

can begin

there you come

moving in and

bursting through

the gates.

You have an


for everything,

Why it so?

Teach the children

the truth;

That they will


that hell is not

the place they are

trying to go.

so at least give

them the name

of the truths

you follow.

The one that has

directed you

now you believe

sincerely .

that everything

came from nothing

totally bypassing

what it is, and what

it was created to be

then went on to

make us?

Or maybe we are

all just a dream?

only maybe you are

lost now that

You are dreaming

About the truth.

How can we have?

No beginning

How can there be

No God?

Please! Don’t be

A fool!

Take my hand!


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    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks Eddy and great to see you as always . Glad you liked this one, and even more so that you love this song, because it is one of my favorites.

      He blew me away when I say him sing it and knew immediately, just as when I first read your poems. That's what life is all about and it continues it don't break , it gets corrected and strong. And the great thing we would always know when it's truthful.

      It is what it is!

      Have a wonderful day and sincere thanks.


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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      A great read my friend and another to vote up .

      I love the song and hadn't heard it sung by this artist before so a wonderful treat all round.

      Take Care and enjoy your day.


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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thank you Rose , that's the meaning of it all, there is a hand that's always waiting outstretched. Make your complaint a new one not the same old one that had you many years , like attitude. I have seen attitude turn people into slaves and you know who is the master of slavery.

      This is the day that the lord have, let us rejoice and be glad.

      I know that you are Rose and I can only say , don't let anything steal your joy.

      Have a bless day and sincere thanks .

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful! Your talents shining through. Take the hand of the Lord and you'll never go wrong. God bless as always.

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thank you Hyphen. For such a wonderful comment . Sometimes it quite amazing , when you find those who are on tracks similar to where you stand . God blesses and I am sure of that, I am hoping we all soon understand why he does, and how to recognize it.

      Blessings are welcome , I know your heart. The true love comes from the truthful heart.

      Sincere thanks Hyphen and Bless.

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      Brenda Barnes 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

      I agree sky. The truth of God's love is too precious to ever be forsaken. As I come to know Jesus and just what His sacrifice meant, I want others to know Him even more. We must live in love and integrity. Thank you for the poem.

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Like brethren Frank can. Greatly appreciated . Life is 100% what we make it . Same will love to hold on to what we made it but check that. "It is what it is" and here I am saying to you, there is still time and that I understand that all good things these days seems to be difficult to achieve. That's how far we have put it now it looks difficult to fetch it.

      Here this it you hide a lot , eventually you will hide from your own self. You are running and running and running away. But you can't runaway from yourself.

      Hope you are preparing solid answers.

      Those people that you hear saying there is no God I have concluded that it's only for attention. God exist or we don't take your the blinders , before they say our Parents were just a dream.


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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      you know sky I like the way the stream guides you.. fills you with the message and if you still can't absorb the true meaning it further extends his hand.. take it and follow.. he'll guide you yeah I love it up and awesome hell, I'll even hit funny too just to give this hub another positive feedback great write :)

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thank you so much thelyricwriter, not for anything but your understanding. That's what it's all about by your works you shall be known.

      Those people would not understand how powerful love it when you understand Love.

      It's always to be shared , for it's not selfish.

      I have done it right here on HP. Love is not shy , but rather brave and to the point. It's hard but if you have not grown to love your parents it might get difficult to love others. Take a look at this and listen .

      Thanks again thelyricwriter, it gives great encouragement.

      Bless you both.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Voted up and all across but funny Sky. This is a great poem. Very good at that. I get a powerful message from this. No matter what others do to us, we must not drop to their level. This is not what God wants. Even though it may be hard, we must show love, courage, and help those who don't see the light. This poem hits home for me, especially at this point in my life. I am dealing with greed from my wife's family right now. I will make sure she reads this awesome poem. Great job.