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Taken into my Dreams

Updated on September 25, 2013
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I will never die, I am immortal .

.I am a vampire..

who has lived for hundreds of years .. .

Leave your window open tonight,

I will kiss you on the cheek while you sleep ..

TAKEN..

Taken into a surreal dream
figuring out just what it means,
flashes of lightning... fill my soul
send me flying out of control

Taken to forgotten sky
forms of me... easily fly,
kept within the realms I know ..
waiting for the time to slow

My mind has frozen... in it's wake
here is my body... for you to take
return me to that time and place
where I found this.. lonely face
a land long gone .. a sea of blue
where warmness enveloped
me and you

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    • cleaner3 profile image
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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you EDDY..!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Beautiful Michael ;a gem for sure and here's wishing you a great day.

      Eddy.

    • cleaner3 profile image
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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you ..Blossom.!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A creative poem - plus, plus, plus! Amazing imagination.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you ..Chris

      I have a dream about trying to unite all poets.. breaking up the cliques on hubpages.. so we can increase traffic to all .. but it is just a dream..!

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      Scarface1300 4 years ago

      Great lyrical piece, I loved the idea of mixing the genres of Immortality and dreams (A genre I really enjoy) with that of love. You seem to be on a roll my friend and it's great to see. May it continue on. Best wishes..... Chris

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you ..for the comment .. bhargvi.. it is appreciated

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      Bhargvi Sharma 4 years ago from jammu ( India)

      Nice one... Voted up!!! :)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Faith .. my good friend, your visit is appreciated and so welcome .. yes I awoke and saw this picture ...the words just jumped upon the page ..

      thank you for the unwavering support Faith ..

      Love you ..

      Michael

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Wnd.. you are the best ..!

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Wow, Michael, your creative juices are flowing profusely here this day! What a visual you have painted in your words, a masterpiece of emotion, sparks and colors... even more so than in your stunning imagery.

      So glad you are allowing yourself more freedom in your writing once again.

      Up and more and sharing

      Hugs and blessings, Faith Reaper

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      Michael,

      Yes, It would be a great hub. Are you working on it? LOL.- Now I am being pushy.

      You do your best. Like Faith Reaper said in her comment in a previous hub, it's okay to take a break.

      Whatever you write is going to be great.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you WND..

      I just noticed that most of the poets and their followers are broken into groups (cliques)..

      it would be great if we all could meld into one ..

      (hmm. that might be a great hub.?)

      a huge happy family .. but there are too many issues.. people have with one or another ..

      (can't we all get along?)

      just dreaming again..! I do that often..!

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      Michael,

      A different touch from you.

      You are very talented.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Bless you Sparklea... your comments are so good .. my favorites for now (I am quite fickle).. LOL

      you always give me too much credit ..!

      Michael

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Bill .. a long way to go ..before I quit.!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Jamie.. creative is my middle name .. hmmm sounds like a poem that needs to be written .. any takers ?

      love your comment .

      Michael

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you ..Eric..

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Kim, it is a different in words but the same .. if you believe that !

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks Lyricwriter.. you are also a very fine poet..!

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      Sparklea 4 years ago from Upstate New York

      cleaner3: voted up and beautiful and, as always, I could feel your emotions. Also I could visualize everything especially the sea of blue and the lightning. Your poetry remains short, sweet, to the point. Your creativity is wonderful. Blessings always Sparklea :)

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Right on Michael! You are getting better before our very eyes and it is a pleasure to watch.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      Thank you for a great poem, this is a different tone that what we have been reading lately, but it is so refreshing to create whatever needs to be created at the time. Jamie

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      Eric Dierker 4 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Just a wonderful poem. Thank you for some sweetness in this brutal work day.

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago

      The imagery is awesome. Somehow, this one seems a little different from some of your other work, but just as evocative. Thank You.

      Kim

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      Richard Ricky Hale 4 years ago from West Virginia

      Voted up, awesome, and beautiful cleaner. I love the associations to dreams and immortality. Beautiful choice off words Cleaner3, well done.

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