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Taken Away (poem)

Updated on February 1, 2015

(Let your imagination free)



What possible purpose is reason to me

Whose heart by a dream was taken away

To fields fraught with passion where wishes play

And whispers of kisses set my soul free

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No limits just skies of things I can do

The music of winds is at my command

The pathways to wonder now close at hand

Those things which made sense are no longer true

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Forever and never become the same

Those thoughts running wild are hard to maintain

I turn to unknown to help me explain

What had brought me here it once had a name

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And as the man sank and followed his song

She poured one more drink and whispered so long

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Mhatter99...one wonders what thoughts go through ones mind..to make them do what they do..and sometimes not even they know the reasons...liked it very much..

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Mh, the mind is that main battlefield for sure. When one thinks on one thought too long, then it can manifest itself in reality, which is scary, as to exactly what it is one is thinking no doubt!

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Lisa Stover 4 years ago from Pittsburgh PA

      I really like the feeling of this, very deep. You have a great way with words.

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      Linda Crist 4 years ago from Central Virginia

      MH, this one is so beautifully sweet. We are never really prepared for "goodbye" and yet it is inevitable. It is a reminder that if we have never experienced the rain we cannot appreciate the sunshine. It is life albeit painful. A sad and tender piece of work. Thank you.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      You have an interesting and wild imagination!

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      carol stanley 4 years ago from Arizona

      Beautifully written with lots of emotions. Life is full of pain, heartache and love and happiness.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Sadness can certainly fill an ending relationship. Keeping the good memories helps to overcome.

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      Beautiful write, Martin. You bring to life words of pain and disappointment. We have to believe that there is something

      better that awaits us, lest we dream in vain.

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      breakfastpop 4 years ago

      Lovely and ad at the same time. Voted up, beautiful and awesome.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Another wonderful creation Martin; a truly talented writer and keep them coming.

      Have a great day.

      Eddy.

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      thost 4 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

      A very nice poem Martin. The blues are creeping in, so pour another drink. Will vote up.

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      ahorseback 4 years ago

      This is very nice , Talk about free verse ! awesome !....Ed

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      This was a wonderful write, the depth of character is so symbolic.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful Martin. I could feel the pain...

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      Sammy 4 years ago

      My mom and dad and my brothers and sisters all 10 of them died in the 2004 Tsunami when i was 11 years old and none cares

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